Reviews for Early Arrival |
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![]() ![]() Oh dear! Tatooine, the last place Anakin/Vader ever wants to go to, and it’s the last place Wrinkles would look for him. Of all the places ever, to our newly minted Sith Lord, it’s ironically the safest place so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, just what I thought would happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Daddy Vader is scary! But the twins chase him off! So sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Off to hide with the Lars clan, maybe? It'd be awesome if Obi and Ani prepare to take out Palpy together! Someone still needs to smack Yoda upside the head, though. Padme, maybe? I could see her doing that. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this keeps on getting better and better. try not to fall into the trap of making Palpatine do nothing and allow him to be outsmarted by Ob-wan and Anakin. they are smart people but Sidious is the king of manipulation. their is no way in hell that he just going to sit back with a nice bottle of wine as his apprentice turns against him :D |
![]() ![]() enjoying your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apparently he gained a great deal of practical knowledge. Good position for dealing with things. Glad he was able to quell her fears. Maybe he is ready to gain perspective and not be so foolish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Serves Obi-Wan right. Not sure I can conceive of a worse combination of attendants. She might have been better off on her ow. And Anakin is still delusional and stupid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the part about Obi-Wan needing to use the refresher. That was funny and one of those real-life things that rarely make it into stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm betting on Obi-wan passing out when he hears there's another one in there :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anakin see woman died in childbirth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love all of your stories, and this far this one is one of my new favorites. I can't wait to see where it goes! |
![]() ![]() It’s not over yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, it really does make sense that Anakin and Shmi would helped the slave women when they were giving birth. So him knowing what to do isn't far-fetched at all. |