Reviews for Early Arrival |
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![]() ![]() ![]() He's gonna have a coronary when Leia comes next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how the story is changing! Fabulous job! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, the yellow eyes are due to Ani's liver! Totally! And the visions changed! All thanks to the little miracles pushing their way out... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story so much! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! Envisioning Obi panic stricken and drooling is hilarious! LOL...Next up, Leia's surprise entrance! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! It looks like either Luke (or Leia or both) changed things to save both parents. ...only... What will Padme say (and do) when she learns the truth? What will happen to Anakin when he realizes (or maybe that Obi-Wan or Padme tells him) that it was what he learned as a boy that saved Padme and not his 'power'? Interesting that his eyes changed back when he concentrated on and repeated his love for Padme and the baby. Looking forward to more. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this so far, as I have with pretty much all of your fics. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am glad this is a short one only because i need to write as well :D looking forward to the next one. i am very curious about how Sidious will react to all of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, NICE start! This is gonna be fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Deesco dancing or Kel enthusiast... that explains Jackson, although I'm personally leaning towards some form of martial arts like his daddy. Oh my gosh, that last line... xD xD xD xD xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Obi-wan. This was NOT in the "How to be a Jedi" manual! Oh boy, can't wait to see how this plays out... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so excited to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yessssssss. Give it to me! God, I love your stories, they've inspired me to actually begin production on a foray of my own into Star Wars (well you and the new Disney crap. The only canon is Legends! The Force Wills It!), and most of them are a delightful mix of serious and hilarious. If you've never read it, check out 'For family' by nanuk. Fantastic Vader Redemption story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is such a neat idea! I like it a lot and can't wait to see how the twins come early will change the course of the plot! It's great that they are both right since they had a boy/girl twin, LOL! Great beginning, I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Oh! I’m sure Obiwan didn’t think he was going to assist in the birth of Anakin’s children.. I’m curious to see how Anakin is going to react to the whole situation. I’m looking forward to reading more of this very captivating story. I’ve already added to my Favorite and Followed stories. Looking forward to the next chapter. :] |