| Reviews for Early Arrival |
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   Joeclone chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 I like it! Different era, familiar faces, and the stakes are high! |
| Morriganna chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 LOL! HELP! HELP! |
| lynxreader chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 oh, now THIS is a novel twist on things. so many possibilities, you could move the very next scene in almost any direction at all. possibly the _least_ likely direction to go from here would be souring the relationship between Anakin and Obi-Wan; they'll spend the next few hours fretting over Padme and the kids instead of duelling, after all - so there goes maybe half of canon right off those rails. watched, most eagerly. |
| Jadaerys chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 yeay, following! |
| sunmoonwindandstars chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 Wonderful! Great start and I can't wait to see what Anakin does! What Obi does! What Padme does! Love it! |
| ghaisdlkfns chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 oh this could be interesting :) try not to redeem Vader in a few chapters. it ruins a lot of the suspense inside what could be a very good story. |
| Nightwing5123 chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 I like the way you have Obi-Wan running around screaming for help. |
| Angelus Draco chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 Very good start. I must confess, I felt tremendous glee in the last sentence and I could just picture the scene of a terrified Obi-Wan screaming in a high pitched voice, running down the ramp whilst Anakin stares in shock. I look forward to seeing what happens next; hoping for two slightly terrified Force users against an in pain/angry Padme. :D |
| Darth Tenibris2 chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 This has already got me squealing like a idiot! Ohh I can't wait! I dare say I've not read a single thing from you I've not loved from the first chapter! |