Reviews for Early Arrival |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta say, at first I was like, "What about Han?" But it all works out in the end. :) He also still gets his happy ending. I love all the Skywalker siblings. And Jackson. Holy Force. If that kid is only thirteen and he's almost as tall as his dad... just wow. He's gonna be HUGE. They're all wonderful. This was a lovely ending. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! Wonderful ending! Absolutely loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's amazing how changing one aspect (Padmé going into labour on Mustafar) opened up the avenue for such an interesting story. Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Obi-Wan being squeamish while Padmé was in labour was hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this alternative ending! Please do such endings again sometime! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I like this idea for this significant AU. :) Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah, the ending makes perfect sense. With no Empire Han and Leia would never have met. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Did NOT see that coming! But I actually agree. I think Han and Qi'ra would have made a good couple. No question she loved him...she let him go, despite the pain it caused her. Very enjoyable story! I look forward to more of your amazingly creative works! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I have always been of the opinion that Ani and P would've had a whole passel of kids. As an only child, I think Ani would've wanted a large family. So, this is just great! Bring on the babies! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh...Skywalker Baby Bliss. Perfect. Absolutely perfect. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() BABY YODA! It is absolutely adorable! I'm loving The Mandalorian so far. Glad the Kenobi family made it through the birth of their first child. Ob-Wan is such a proud daddy. And Jinn is the perfect name for his little boy. :) My God, two more baby Skywalkers! Good luck, Anakin and Padmé. They're going to have their hands full wrangling five Skywalker children. I shudder to think what they'll be like as adults. In canon, Luke was blowing up giant battle stations at 19 and Leia was practically leading an entire rebellion at the same age. To have five of them running around - now that's insanity. Great chapter and story. I love all the weddings and relationships and babies. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What are you planning on doing about the two jedi in fallen order? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Padme pregnant with twins again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am not pregnant again yet (thank God) but I very much sympathize with Padmè's exhaustion. |