Excited to see task 2!

enjoying each and every step, looking forward to the next steps!

Amazing! So wrapped up in reading I forgot to review each chapter. The relationships and conversation btw each main character (Harry-Hermione, Harry-Fleur) do such a good job showing how each character feels (sibling, friend to growing more)
Can’t wait to read more!

Late to the party but fun start, enjoying the narration.

Love the story! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hello, me again, you'll probably see my name pop up a a few more times while I read and review your story. The dialouge in this chapter felt off too. When you had McGonagall comfort Harry you wrote, "Mr. Potter, Harry you could very well die" the line(s) above when you introduced McGonagall, you did make sure McGonagall's dialouge was more formal due to her character, but I'm not sure why you added a line between the two lines both said by McGonagall. Your first sentence of the chapter was almost beautifully written, then you separated it with a period. "I've been through a lot of shitty, dangerous and especially odd happenstance in* and around this castle but not once have I seen this look of utter disappointment on Dumbledore's face." i feel like this sentence sounds a bit better even though it is longer. I am interested to see what happens next. I did see that the judges said no external help, I wonder if that includes friends or if they were just referring to the teachers. The Trio's all together approach could be dashed instantly of so.

I feel like the dialog of this chapter was odd at times. you used "cause" early on, then used "you are" vs "you'reand in my opinion that makes for jarring dialouge at times. It was a short chapter, not much else to review in it.

I wasn't sure about the first person perspective but I think you've nailed it here. Glad I saw this as a recommended story. I'm interested to see how and when Fleur realizes she _did_ meet Harry Potter.

This is really well written, your dialogue is quite natural. Your characters actually sound like they're speaking to each other rather than taking at one another. Either way I've been enjoying reading it and hope it will continue!

Quite a nice chapter. Katie is gold as usual, with her witty remarks and taking the lead dancing. Rewlly enjoyed this one. #flowerpot

It's good. A few lingiustic quirks that distract though.

Interesting story but confused why Harry wouldn’t tell here the answer to the clue. I mean he could have passed a message even if they didn’t see each other.

Tbh, this is one of the most well-written harry x fleur fics out there. i was really surprised with the wittiness of their dialogue and everything else in between. hope your in good health and i cant wait for the next chapter!

David, this is absolutely great. I started off reading it and the small chapter 1 was a bit...slow for me. In a way that I expected more but as the chapters progressed, I am left wanting for more. I am truly interested in how you approached the GoF story. How you managed Ron's behavior and of course the romance. I can't wait for your next chapters! -seawolfv

Nice Fic