This is amazing.

oo everyone gonna really think he a dark lord

curious to see if the elemental wave was forshadowing

Es una historia entretenida e interesante, te felicito por tu esmeró en ella.
Es interesante como retratarse a Fleur, a diferencia de muchos autores, no la hiciste parecer arogante.
También vale recalcar la narración desde primera persona, no es común.
Espero que puedas seguir pronto, estaré al pendiente.

I am so enjoying this story and do hope you continue to post and update.

Fleur's perspective is a wonderful thing. It is interesting to read her thoughts about their relationship.

But, I must say, it felt like they took one step forward at the ball, and two steps back in this chapter. I understand that you need to stretch their relationship for almost the entire academic year, and this is difficult, but it turns out that after the ball they immediately stop seeing and communicating. Hopefully not until the second test. Preparing for it, of course, should take time, but not months.

Thank you for reminding me of two things.. I despise Hermione with every fiber of my being and I really hate the term "Mione"!

I just read all of this in a day when I really have more pressing things to get to, but I couldn't put it down. Can't wait to read more!

It makes logical sense that a parselmouth would be immune to the gaze. It would be rather inconvenient for Salazar or Tom to talk to the snake with eyes closed.

Really good chapter. How long do you plan to continue this story? As in how many chapters?

I must admit I'm not a big fan of Fleur in canon nor in fanfiction. But your Fleur is so adorable I'm totally hooked. Well done!

Love it

Cool! please update it soon!

This chapter was definitely worth the wait.

Things are picking up! Loved the POV from Fleur. Seems like she’s come to the recognize her own feelings. The suspense is starting to get to me. As always I lover how you write your characters. The idea you have going for Harry tackling the 2nd task is different from what I usually see so I’m looking forward to how it plays out. Hope to see more from you soon!