I liked how Fleur turned out. Bit of a shift, but I think it went well. Good reveal on how she discovered the task

This is becoming one of my favorite Harry and Fleur fics. Love how things are developing between them. I can only imagine what things will look like after the 2nd task. Will this fic go till just the end of 4th year or further beyond? Will be recommending this fic in the HarryandFleur subreddit.

Awesome story. Keep going!

Oh an update. Dear me, this is nice. I don't mind a 6 month wait, when it comes it comes.

Wow! From start to finish you had me hanging on. As much time as I spend reading I rarely find a story that has me so emotive. From laughing out loud to squirming with discomfort your authorship has me near desperate for more. Truly a great read, one I thank you for. I look forward more of your work.

The comment about a "banshee that forgot to turn the stove off" and Harry's intraction with the mermaid relief were both pure gold. The romantic scene was a bit drawn out though.

All in all I'm happy to have favorites and followed this story and can't wait for more.

I just realized at the very end that Viktor is angry at Harry because he used Grindelwald a favorite curse. Completely escaped my mind how much of a hate boner he has for Dumbledore's ex lover

I somehow managed to put my review for this chapter as the review for the previous chapter. I don't know how I managed to do that.

You usually have much fewer typos. In this chapter as soon as they leave Homeydukes they become really bad. Honey ducks is my favorite.

And yes, I have gone ahead and read the authors notes in the next chapter, and you making excuses is why I'm chastising you now. Go back and proofread this chapter. There is even one in Fleurs Speach that I know for a fact wasn't because of her accent.

Two spelling mistakes

"what time of creature" should be "what type of creature" and "now here's, cloak" should be completely rewritten.

"Alas, it appears as though my plan for you to fail the tasks in the safest way possible has just been sabotaged by my own assumptions'

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I can only pray to one day write a characterization of Dumbledore so spot on as yours. Not just this paragraph, all of them so far.

This is a beautiful story! Looking forward to updates

Really good chapter. Can't wait for the next 1. Hey, do you take idea requests?

They'll have to kiss at some point or I'll lose my mind

Good one