I just saw a bug happened in my review so I correct hereje pensais avoir été clair" you...
"ce ne sont pas mes paroles" it is...
"das matin" if you...
"le culot d'elle" the correct...
"ma coquin" Harry...

Hello, I'm happy to read a new chapter of this great fanfiction. It is cool to see Harry and Fleur getting closer. Now, if you allow me I will correct some errors you made in French.
"Je pensais avoir été clairyou have to add a "e" to "clair" because Maxime is a female.
"ce ne sont pas mes parolesit is technically correct but we won't say that. We would say "ce ne sont pas mes mots" or "je n'ai pas dit ça"
"das matinif you meant "tomorrow morning" you have to say "demain matin" or "dès demain" or "dès demain matin" because "das matin" just doesn't exist.
"le culot d'ellethe correct saying is "quel culot" but you can also say "elle ne manque pas d'air"
"ma coquinHarry is a male so you have to say "mon coquin". But you wrote it well later so maybe it is just a mistake because of your new keyboard.
Well that's all. I hope my explanations were easy to understand, it is the first time I explane French to someone else. Hope you will update soon !
A (quite annoying) French reader

Lovely chapter, and better than ever. Great to see you writing again!

I love how you go into detail and describe everything. Honestly it makes the wait worth the while. It's beautiful. I love how you use french as well. Not many are able to capture it like you. Do you speak French btw?
And the interplay. Yikes. Goosebumps. It's a beautiful story and captures them beautifully. I can honestly say this is a story only about Harry and Fleur and nothing else and that makes it beautiful. There are other characters and possibly plots and subplots but this truly is a Harry/Fleur story if not THE Harry/Fleur story. It's amazing.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Absolutely loved it, and definitely worth the wait!
The cute and budding relationship between Harry and Fleur was amazing to read, and I absolutely love your characterisation of them.
It’s truly heartwarming to read.
Quality of the writing was also excellent, and really drew me into the story and kept my attention. Definitely is the ‘cutest’ Harry/Fleur fic I’ve read recently. All the little details, like Fleur’s love for chocolates, really helps to set the mood and makes the characters far more approachable and pleasant to digest.
Another amazing chapter, can’t wait for the rest to unfold.

That was a good little chapter albeit a bit filler-y. Looking forward to the second task!

Why wouldn’t I come back? This is a great story. Also, would you believe me if I told you that you write better than most native English speakers I know? It’s true.

Now on to the story review; I do think Maxine is overstepping her bounds as a headmistress. What her students do in their free time and who they date is none of her concern.

A very enjoyable tale thus far. The back and forth between Harry and Fleur is fun to read. Best of luck continuing the story.

You are absolutely terrific when it comes to your character interactions. It’s a talent for sure. I can not wait for the 2nd task to come considering I feel like that’s when this friendship will turn into something more...
Looking forward to whenever you get the chance to update again!

Stay safe and healthy!

This is great can't wait for the next chapter. :)

I have to say i really enjoy the dialogues between everyone it's quite witty and makes the relationship development really develop well keep it up!

Loved seeing the interaction between Fleur and Harry at the ball. At some point they will realize what’s right in front of them

Like it so far

good chapter cant wait for the next one