Thanks for writing this. Beautiful story.

Nice update! Excites to see more! Very sweet conversation between characters in this chapter

Wow this is great! I really like your writing, and your character developing for Harry! And Harry and Fleur's relationship is really good too!

Quick question for you though, was the "drink wine from their skulls" bit a reference to Mount & Blade? It just struck me, and I couldn't ignore it.

Can't wait for more of this beautiful story!

I just marathoned this and boy was it enjoyable. It had some of the best character interaction I've ever read. Especially between Harry and Fleur, their relationship feels extremely natural and not at all forced as is often the case. Everything about them makes sense and it's great to see them banter. Usually first-person pov fics tend to feel like they don't match up with how the characters actually are, but not in this case. This is probably my favorite fic right now. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for this great work.

I do ever so much enjoy a story with strong characters. I look forward to how you continue this!

Wow. this story is a breath of fresh air. never seen such a spin on book 4. love it!

Hey There i juste thought that tour story je Brest ans no tout french ain't too bad zone grammar problème but morning to worry about si Jeep at it mon ami et tu as des salutations du Québec

This story is really good! I’m loving how the romance is developing.
That said, it’s suffering from a bit of Ron neglect.
Also, try using more contractions, please. It really gives the dialogue a more natural feel.

Mentor!Dumbledore is so awesome. More please.

A fourth-year fic with a Harry/Fleur pairing which has Harry and Ron making up?
That’s preposterous. I love it.

Wow, beautiful chapter, I really loved it. Don't worry for your French, it is good, ahah. I hope your situation will get better.
A French reader

Ty for keeping with the story! I love when we get to see more creative magic, this world is so open, and seeing people limit themselves to the same old stuff is just disappointing

Hope you are doing better and better!

Another well done chapter.
The quality of your writing and the way in which you are conveying their emotions is exceptional, and it hasn’t diminished at all.
I’m really loving this version of Harry/Fleur, mainly because they seem more playful with each other. Fleur’s sweet tooth really gives some great opportunities for these interactions.
Excellent work, as always.
Can’t wait for the next one!

It's been a long time since an update, but reading this chapter reminded me of why I loved this story. I kept pausing and starting over because I loved it and didn't want it to end. If I could favourite a chapter, I'd definitely favourite this one. The dynamic between Fleur and Harry is extremely smooth and good and Fleur as a character I believe that you have portrayed her best in comparison to all stories I've read about her. The quirks, the personality. You haven't muted anything out but brought out her traits in an endearing manner while adding your own twists which is beautiful. I loved this, and I'm glad to see you back.
Normally I get frustrated if Harry couldn't take her to the ball, but in this case, it came out perfect. Thanks for the chapter.

This is really sweet, keep up the good work!