I had almost lost hope for more chapters, but you definitely made the wait worth it.

This was a nice enjoyable chapter.

I particularly enjoyed Katie's character and the way she portrayed herself. Honestly she seemed cooler than Fleur by the end. I wonder how much of her behaviour was just her making Fleur jealous and how much was bluster (although I suspect that will not be explored given how Harry/Fleur focused this fic is, some similar love triangle may be interesting for a future fic though).

Buen capítulo.

Lamento que estés con tantos problemas. C'est la vie dicen... Espero que ahora anden las cosas mejor.

Hoy tuve que re leer todo para acordarme cual era tu ff cuando me salió la alerta y noté un par de cosas que me dieron ganas de charlar con vos aprovechando que hablas español.

Primero es el tema de Rita animandose a escribir contra Dumbledore, sin el ministerio atrás y sin Dumbledore muerto no la veo escribiendo algo crítico de él tan fácilmente. Me llamó un poco la atención que se le anime.

Segundo es Charlie Weasley que me chocó como lo escribiste jajaja.

Después hay un par de temas como Sirius que no aparece y otras cosas pequeñas pero no quiero hacer más largo el review.

El capítulo en general me pareció simpático y la historia me gusta pero me pregunto como llevarás la relación de ambos después de que elle deje la escuela, estando en Francia encima.

Espero que las cosas mejoren para vos pronto y ver nuevos capítulos

Saludos!

I like this story it’s cute and fluffy

Take care of yourself, then the story. Good chapter

Nice long chapter after a long wait is nice. good job

Yo, I love this story. However, I do think you need a beta. It reads well, and you seem to have the grammar down outside of a few capitalization issues, but there were some misspelled word, missing words, and even extra words where there didn’t need to be. Still, great story, and I love it. Can’t wait for more.

I like this chapter, the interactions between everyone is really good. Harry (mostly) and Fleur (slightly) seem to be the only one who don't realize that they are dating already. Looking forward to reading more!

Man I hope you're fine, we all go through things it'll pass, and speaking of your current chapter you don't know how much appreciate it. I loved it please take care of yourself and your family, and keep writing

That was a really fun chapter. I think you might be making Harry a bit too romantically stunted, he may be dense but I doubt a 14 year old boy would be THAT oblivious to a hot older girl.

Glad you're doing ok. Not that it help but sorry your cohabiters treated you like crap. At least you got a new place before the government locked you in with them!

I enjoyed this chapter. It's so sweet. I hope you have the time to continue to write. All the best in the future.

Your take on this story idea of Harry and Fleur getting together is good. It doesn't go off of the premise that they got together because Harry saves Gabrielle or defends Fleur from the grindylow, both of which have been done to death. The only suggestion I would make is to find a beta reader that English is their first language. Have noticed several instances of know in place of now or on in place of in, which a proofreader could help catch. Other than that, bon chance.

always nice to see this updated look forward the next chapters

Hello,

I love the characterization of Harry and Fleur, and I often found myself smiling at their interaction. The supporting characters are really nice as well.

Cheers

Interesting story looking forward to the next chapter