would love to see this updated...

As inspirational as it is aspirational. And the other way around too.
I would need your skill with words to properly praise this. It's only fault. And it is a rather huge one, is that it ends.

I'd love to wait for the end to review. And in all probability I will remember to do so. But just in case I don't.
This is a masterpiece. You have taken a world that already had a life of its own and breathed more into it then the creator could ever hope to match. This is not an imitation or shadow of the original, but truly something that surpasses it.
The characters, move and think and feel. And it is so realistic and fun. Genuinely impressed. Best thing I've read in several years.

A choice that we might never learn about... I've come to expect stories to run out, but to stop at such a little cliffhanger, well that's just cruel.

This story is outstanding. I love your dialogue so much. I usually don’t like first person but you are nailin it

Are you still working on this one? Too bad if not, but then life does happen.

I love this story. Just reread it for the second time. Please complete it.

Beautiful story. Your characterization is.. stunning in a word. I truly appreciate how much effort you put into developing our two main characters relationship and personalities. Hermione is a breath of fresh air as well, you've done her justice thrice over in your depiction of her. Katie's crush was unexpected but oh so welcome, finding that kind of gentle representation is rare in fanfiction and I thank you for it. In addition to that your twists on Harry's solutions to the tasks and perspective on his situation had me reading avidly in a way I find rarer still. Thank you for sharing your work, it's been a genuine pleasure to read.

Fantastic story, and I'm hoping that you complete it. We've finally come to the point where they get together and...nothing. Please finish the story so we can all be happy in life.

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER FFS! AHHHHHHH!

Lots of rhyming in this chapter.

This story is great! Hope you continue it :)

I hope you continue, but regardless this is an amazing story and a pleasure to read so thanks for writing it :)

Hi!
This story is very great despite few flaws. Please continue it, I am waiting for it's updates You have left it in a cliffhanger.

Love the story, though I just wish the "by the Gods" stuff would stop. It seems so forced and out of place. Why would Harry be talking like that? He wasn't raised around people from magical culture, and even then Christianity and even Islam isn't foreign in the Harry Potter universe to magical people, so why would they who are so far removed from Greek culture, still be talking like that? I get this is fanfiction, but this makes little sense to me.