you better replace harrys firebolt with a new one

Fair enough, I was completely wrong. There was enough to see Cedric got warned I just missed it because it was more minor than I had expected.

This chapter was great! One of the best dragon fights I've read in recent fanfic. Harry doesn't often lose his temper in this scene and it was interesting seeing what you did. I think Fleur slapping him so harshly after the task might have annoyed him more but whatever, not a big issue compared to a dragon hit I guess.

Really nice chapter. Great that Harry took more realistic injuries than he more or less didn't in canon. The connection with Fleur is developing nicely. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to the next installment.

Great story, enjoying it so far and I'll definitely follow it. Did Harry forget about Cedric though? That seems unlike him.

Hi,

1. Within - not withing.

2. Doesn't mean, or didn't mean, or hasn't meant.
not doesn't meant.

3. A book about British Kingdom Triwizard Champions doesn't make much sense. There is no British Kingdom. There was a United Kingdom of Great Britain from 1707 to 1800, which is about the time the Tournament was previously canceled. (after that it was the UK of GB and Ireland, and after that the UK of GB and Northern Ireland, nut that's irrelevant.)

Considering the tournament was held from the 13th century through the 18th, with a school in Scotland that has English students as well as Scots, likely also Welsh, possibly the Irish as well, I'd go with a title about the British Isles, not the "British Kingdom".

1. sighed, not sighted.

2. Dumbledore has always been, not had always been.

3. Also, this has been too much, not had been.

4. These heavy thoughts, not this.

5. the stairs victim - should be the stairs' victim.

6. a forced, awkward smile - should possibly be an awkward, forced smile. The first means he forced an awkward smile, where he could have forced any kind of smile. The later means the smile was awkward; Being forced might have had something to do with that.

Lo amé por completo, espero puedas actualizar pronto

great writing awesome work

good chapter please update again soon

This story always makes me smile, so thanks.

Hmmm...if Hermione keeps antagonizing Fleur...she may get a fireball to her hair, LOL.

I've just caught this up. Great story. Really like the first person manner of telling your tale. A note: a beta wouldn't hurt there have been some grammatical/verbiage issues that one would help with but beyond this a smashingly good story. Thanks loads for your hard work on it, looking forward to future installments.

I rather like this, you write well.
If your muse allows for it, I would like to see a bit of hermiones perspective on the events that are unfolding as well. I am curious about how she is affected by fleur s presence

Wow, amazing chapter. Thank you for updating so quickly, can hardly wait for the next.

Nice chapter. The next could be quite interesting.