Reviews for A Court of Flowers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story so far keep it up |
![]() ![]() This is quite a fun story. Thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I hope this is updated soon! Such an amazing fic! I don't think I've ever read a fic that hid that Fleur was a Veela. I'm really looking forward to where this goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm very good so far. Little grammar mistakes that send me round the bend but otherwise well done. The only thing I don’t like about this story is it’s not finished. Oh well. Hopefully I remember to check for updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The byplay with Cedric was quite funny. He’s usually one of my favorite characters in most. Not many people try to make him live unfortunately. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The writing is good but just a tad too much description on hood suit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm not you saying English is your second language explains everything. At first I thought it was at best High-school level writing but realized the story was better done than most highschool stories could ever be. I had an errant thought last chapter that English wasn’t native. Therefore I’ll say that I can ignore a majority of your mistakes; though some parts were ridiculously butchered. Oh well good writing. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE the fact that your characters are so eloquent. The way they speak reminds me of older films. Normally, first person POV becomes tiresome to read but your dialogs are just make so much SENSE and I apologize but words fail me because I can’t express how much I enjoyed reading them. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Cant wait to see Fleur reveal all to Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() How does asking if she's lost again make him a prat? That's a very reasonable thing to ask? Maybe next explain that he said it annoyed or something so it doesn't look so borked. Seriously there's nothing wrong with asking that question or saying it nicely after she was a prat first god's this Harry's a bitch |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first person perspective threw me off at first, but after a bit of adjusting, this is quite an excellent story. I look forward to reading more of it! |
![]() ![]() “Cleverer” isn’t a proper phrase. “More clever” is. |
![]() ![]() How would being a parsalmouth protect him from a basilisk’s stare? That makes no sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang man, I don't know how you're able to pull on my heartstrings this way but it's working! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls update T_T |