Reviews for Departure from the Diary |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Slow read since i think it drags things out. Herm being bichy seems a bit extreme to me but it's your story. When is a story going to get rid of Barty Jr early in story? No one has done that and you missed that plot thread. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really nice story. I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Katie in most fics. She's really nice in this one as well |
![]() ![]() ![]() HarryTamIt's not like our actions have consequences, right?" Oh you have no idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() So the prophecy is different here? Seems to be only slightly, but that makes a huge difference |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, friends! Lovely Bit sad that he's distancing from his other friends, but I guess that's to be expected I definitely thought Lupin was going to die I really like this chapter, especially the use of we and us at certain times, it implied fascinating things about their mental state |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems that they forgot that Remus told them Pettigrew is a rat. Oh my |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to have to completely disagree with Harry here, that alchemy text was absolutely FASCINATING, even if it confirms with my headcanon (and also popular in a lot of fics), it's still very, very interesting. I could probably read a book like that in one sitting (and likely forget to eat and sleep too) I love magic, and I love magical theory |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, so it was magelight from TES, I was right. Nice Also, at that point I would consider opening a portal to a different planet in a different star system and taking the mages with them. Harry and Tam might even go to their own personal planet and only occasionally visit the mage planet. They could relax at their new home without worrying about being attacked by the people that they hate. Sounds soothing and nice 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lumos Magus! Mage light? Like from The Elder Scrolls? Cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, that ending. So lovely! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever read Huffily Puffily? The main character, Lucy, also befriends Tom (male in that), though he's a bit different from Tam. It's a really good read though, my favourite fic, in fact |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohh, more bonding! Nice :p Also, if each horcrux splits the soul exactly in half, then Voldemort would be only about 3% of her original soul by the time she attacks the Potters, even less afterwards. That probably affects sanity, I would think. Maybe |