Reviews for Departure from the Diary
EvelynnSylph chapter 11 . 11/26/2024
Oohh, more bonding! Nice :p

Also, if each horcrux splits the soul exactly in half, then Voldemort would be only about 3% of her original soul by the time she attacks the Potters, even less afterwards. That probably affects sanity, I would think. Maybe
EvelynnSylph chapter 10 . 11/26/2024
Aww, look at them bonding. How cute
EvelynnSylph chapter 10 . 11/25/2024
I love magical theory. It's so fascinating! 3
EvelynnSylph chapter 8 . 11/25/2024
I love this chapter! It's amazing and I really love all the lore 3

The lore of magical cores explained here is kind of similar to that used in multiple fics of Inwardtransience, where the more you use magic, the more powerful you become, thus older people are generally more powerful

Oh, The History Importance Of Runic War Warding In The British Isles is an amazing fic. I really love it!

Also, I love that there's a reference to your other story, I really like it when that happens in a fic. It's like an alternate dimension crossover, except not. Seer exclusive and so. I recently read a few where Luna Lovegood could do that. Really fascinating
EvelynnSylph chapter 7 . 11/25/2024
There are also a few stories were Luna has mage sight, and the nargles wrackspurts and other such things are just types of magic that she thought was creatures since she didn't really she could see magic and others couldn't

It's really quite fascinating and probably my favourite interpretation of her
EvelynnSylph chapter 5 . 11/25/2024
I like Tamelyn. She's very interesting
EvelynnSylph chapter 4 . 11/25/2024
The explanation of the diary makes so much sense, brilliant!
InfiniteShadow3 chapter 2 . 10/4/2024
No kidding, Mind Arts are awsome yet horrifying. But you know i think parseltongue is nigh extinct in the world in the modern era. Even in India and Greece, otherwise i would think theyd have asked a parselmouth to find the chamber the first time around or Voldy would have killed them all
Master Chief chapter 25 . 9/18/2024
Shame you didnt finish..
SleepDeprivedRaven chapter 14 . 8/24/2024
The person directly below me is diabolical what the fuck the juxtaposition between them and the commenter directly below them is crazy.

To the actual irl villain Harry is warming up to Tam and he wouldn't want to get rid of her soul, especially not nearly as badly as to rape someone, and he doesn't seem the type to consider rape an option, but idk, he might do it for fun lmao things change. Also raping would not fix someones literal broken soul, which was originally caused by her depressive state while the soul fuckery happened.

To respond to the "fucking hell" guy, Hermione was mad annoying and getting on our nerves so she deserved having her mine read - its not really even that villainous to read someones mind even if its for something minor, they should have lobotomised her given how she's probably going to be a future enemy and annoyance.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/17/2024
You've definitely wasted the "one little potential rape is worse than all the torture and killing I've commited" Tamelyn plot. I can easily see two good uses for it. First one being that it's not completely true and Tam just has to kill from time to time due to the horcrux in Harry being corrupted by using dark magic for decades.
The second option would have Harry use that weakness. He'd have to get amazing at occlumency first to hide his plan, and legilimency to execute it, then in the climax of the story he's rape Ginny (which would have a small chance of fixing her mind since she's all fucked up in the head and sees Harry as her hero), while simultaneously at first stopping Tam from taking control of his body, then using the shock of what she's witnessing to isolate her soul and destroy it.
fucking hell chapter 24 . 7/21/2024
I hope Harry fucking dies after this. What type of bastard *mind rapes* his friend FOR DISAGREEING WITH HIM?! FUCK HARRY AND TAM, I SUPPORT HERMIONE AFTER THE BULLSHIT HE PULLED, AND FRANKLY SO SHOULD RON. WHAT'S STOPPING THE ASSHOLE FROM MIND RAPING HIM WHEN HE DISLIKES SOMETHING RON DOES!?
Menaphite chapter 25 . 7/1/2024
Coolest story ever
ArashiNokitsune chapter 24 . 6/21/2024
Oh yay the redundant mundane versus magical argument who's more threatening to the other Harry and Hermione are both right and wrong at the end of the day the real threat in terms of that argument is whoever is willing to cross the line. technology or Magic they're both different forms of power and if used destructively can become weapons of mass destruction... beliefs, religion, power and so on there are a lot of reasons in which people can become a threat to one another and they want to argue about... what... the small semantics, if it bites them both in the butt that would be something to be smug about... I know this is just a story but I just... (sigh) I'm getting annoyed by an argument that is simply taking place in a story... personal opinions aside hope the story keeps going
Guest chapter 22 . 6/9/2024
Don't listen to the guy below, nobody is hurt because it's a work of fiction not reality. Perfectly fine if you want a villain MC in your FICTION. lmao

Good job writing it by the way.
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