Harry becomming a Muggle hater is honestly my only issue with this fic and how he genuenly seems too stupid to relise telling a MUGGLEBORN that "There just Muggles" is a incredibly cruel and hurtful thing to say

This is a good read. Would’ve been a lot better if you just had them accidentally kill hermione or something though. I’m following this in the hopes that it’ll be done sooner rather than later. But you really can’t rush a good story.

Man this is a banger. ITs’ a singularly unique story the likes Off which i have never read. Which is quite the accomplishment when you consider the fact I’ve read hundreds of stories with about a halt dozen pairings.

Having “tiers” of magic kinda ruins the flow. It’s probably the worst way to describe it. Well maybe not the worst. At least you didn’t use levels.

Another plus for this is that you do a surprisingly good job at keeping it in first person. Typically it’s V a weird mix of first and third person. I feel that not actively having knowledge that the characters don’t have makes for a far better read.

You do a good job of giving just enough. It’s not a slog to read, however it does feel like it’s moving kinda fast. It reads more like a oneshot than an actual story.

pay no mind to a pussy of a nigga who hides behind a guest account to be toxic who only ead 3 chapters hopes is mom slits his throat your story is awsome author san

Welp I'm out, any story that starts out with Harry being made out to be a pathetic bitch doormat and railroaded into being abused by some femdom misandrist cunt is garunteed to be 100% a flaming pile of disgusting shit.

Lovely story. Quite enjoy the Tammy/Harry relationship and definitely want to see where they end up. Crouch Jr seems way to competent but I guess that makes him interesting.

If Tammy really only ever killed Myrtle on accident and had no other kills, her ease into killing Harry's Aunt seems a bit misplaced.

So happy to hear this story isnt dead Love it and cant wait to read next

Always great to see this fic update, I love Draco being accidentally helpful lol

Good stuff, I'll be following along from now on

"I just kept writing him, and he became stronger and more skilled with time"
Yeah, from your perspective maybe, what actually happened was that he kept telling you to stop nerfing him and he typed it himself hyping himself up cause he's tired of disrespect on his name in fanfic.

I have finally found time to read it. I am so happy that this updated. I am kinda on break from hp fandom, but this one I really like. Honestly, I woupd go as far as say that I can now return to hp fanfiction in general, exclusively thanks to you.

Loved the update.

I don't think I have seen Luna done quite like this. Certainly, there were better takes, I believe, but this one unique and very well done. Being very well done is really rare for her too. All this seer bullshit... she is pretty much my favourite canon character, but yours is so far one of the few that I really like in fanfiction.

Sirius looks very promising too. I wonder what you'll do with him. I hope they'll be friends, of course, but I have faith that I will enjoy their relationships regardless. The Hermione "betrayal" was done gloriously, after all.

If there is one thing I'm not sure if I like, then it's the fact that Tam seems just as good at alchemy as Harry, but with different inclination. I know, I know, it makes perfect sense, she is Dark Lady, genius witch and everything. It probably would be pretty weird if she sucked at it, even. But on some level I hoped that she would anyway. The balance of power still skewed, even if it gets better and better, so I may have hoped that alchemy can act as a sort of equalizer. Even though Tam probably can borrow Harry's talent just as well as he can hers.

I still hope that she would at least suck at Blood Alchemy. That way Harry can be the one to make her body. Fully. Without her help. When she would have failed there. Really, I think it is a great idea. Though I'm not the one who is writing the fic, so... I hope you don't mind ideas such as that one been thrown at you.

Their relationship is perfect though. This whole thing just hits pretty much every spot for me. I have two favourite kinds of character development: Redemption, when villain becomes hero, and Fall from Grace, when hero becomes villain. This is both. Kinda. It's not the text book redemption in Tam's case, but I feel like Harry influenced her from becoming full-blown Voldemort. It's still in the same valley. And if it isn't enough, my favourite type of romance is evil one, when two terrible people are forced to trust each other and then fall in love. It's even perfect on slowburn side!

Tam and Harry realtionship is probably the best thing in the hp fanfiction.

I think you could take more advantage of the muggle perriod of the 1990's for Harry's new stance on muggle's. Namely that the books start in 1991 Harry would have gone to hogwarts before the fall of the USSR and the end of the cold war MAD was a concept well understood by people the idea that Hermione thinks magi are more dangerous than muggles makes little sense nothing in hp lore makes it seem like a mage could end the world when it is well known muggles can and almost did. Also 1994 (the year gobblet of fire starts in)was the year of the rawandian genocide it does not paint a pretty picture of humanity's acceptance of those who are different. I think an important scene you don't have yet is Harry and Tam thinking about a plan B should the statute suffer a cascade failure the introduction of the world wide web makes it far more likely that it will happen before political change could happen. I'm preferential to magical mars base via vanishing cabinet for quic transportation after hitching a ride on the mars global surveyor while sabotaging the mission but other options are kingdom in a cupboard using spacial expansion, or the messy option launch countries nukes and insure MAD occurs (depends on how many magical population centers line up with nuclear targets but places like hogwarts seem to be unlikely to be targets until magic is known about for a while.) In any case I like the fiction thank you for your chapters.