Reviews for An Interrupted Journey
Guest chapter 17 . 10/19
Bennet should be divorced his wife long ago. There were divorces during that period so I call bullshit that he let her rotten behavior and whoring ways continue. Mr Phillips should have done the same with his wife for being a co-conspirator with Fanny
Guest chapter 3 . 10/18
"Still, his greatest failing was his refusal to rein his wife in, make her stop spending so freely, and help her to curb her vulgar behavior." ABSOLUTELY
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18
Just another story where Bennet was such a failure and thanks to someone else (Lady C), the lives of his daughters were made better.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/4
So Edward Younge gave the Bennet daughters their dowries, it wasn't an indolent negligent father Bennet who saved for their dowries
Guest chapter 22 . 9/4
Queen victoria ascended the throne in 1837. Your epilogue starts at 25 years later WHERE there's background of the Darcys supporting Victoria and joining the titled.
Elizabeth was betrothed around 18/19 if not younger in this story, going by the ages of Mary and Kitty. So the dates are wrong somewhere
Guest chapter 21 . 9/4
Would have been better if you expanded this chapter before rushing headlong into an epilogue 25 years later
Guest chapter 18 . 9/4
Seems the story was all about Fanny Bennet who even got an easy death by bullets instead of being hanged.
Guest chapter 21 . 9/4
Seems the subplot has taken over the main plot.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/4
Poor Darcy, worried about the motives of the lesser class whereas his family members, his noble titled family members are guttersnipes
Guest chapter 21 . 9/3
These leaders, influential women of the Ton, like Ladies Miriam, Isabella and Catherine, all preserved the status quo and enabled men like Owen Fitzwilliam and his son in their crass behavior and actions!
For shame this writer and the ideals put forth in this story are atrocious
Guest chapter 3 . 9/3
For shame, this writer is using the excuse of losing a baby to continuously abuse the other twin, which is both emotional and physical abuse
Guest chapter 2 . 9/3
Elizabeth suffers abuse in her home from a harpy mother and a indolent joke of a father.
Azur-Kutsuu chapter 1 . 8/10
Skipbeat fanfiction by leavesfallingup
Colleen S chapter 1 . 8/7
Back reading this marvelous tale! August, 2024...
Petite Mule chapter 22 . 6/29
Thank you for writing and sharing a great story️️️
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