Reviews for The Last Attempt to Save the Pureblood Family Lines |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is been a long time since you updated please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() De Verdad Perfecto; Me Encantó |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story really hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have really enjoyed this story. I do hope that you plan on continuing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and outlook on a marriage law. Looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading through chapter 38. It's a good post-Voldemort story. Once again the Ministry and the Wizarding World is demanding that kids fix the mess the OLD GUYS made! The unintended consequences this time will be extremely counter-productive! One of the premises stated at the beginning is that the muggle-born don't have squibs and that the pure-blood do. Therefore the muggle-born are the ones who are being most targeted for the forced Ministry marriages. However, can you imagine ANY non-magic parent agreeing to let their daughter or son enter a world where at 17 years old their child will be forced to marry and have a baby by the time they are 18 years old? Even Hermione, with her deep thirst for knowledge, would have been willing to be obliviated and her magic bound to avoid that. Nevermind that her parents would have insisted on it. How long before Hogwarts and the Ministry notices that there are no muggle-born Firsties? That will leave only Half-Blood Magicals to be coerced into marriage. Will the Ministry start kidnapping children for their breeding program? Perhaps Voldemort (dogma) isn't as vanquished as everyone thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shouldn't Hermione have said "GCSE's" instead of "O levels" there at the end of the chapter? I beliee O levels were replaced in the late 80s. Anyway, I'm loving the wise and supportive Harry and Hermione, and I really wish Ginny would just et over herself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love re Reading your fic as it touchs in the reality if the law. The people making the law have money to hire elves and nannies but most people don't. And girls get hit the most with their education and jobs being affected |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Thank you for all of the work that you've put onto this tale. I hope to come back to it when you've have the opportunity to post some more chapters. Cheers, Old-Crow |
![]() ![]() Soy mexicano y me gusta mucho tu fanfic actualiza pronto I am Mexican and I really like your fanfic, update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seem to have forgot one or two of your earlier storylines. Harry and the gang know who Snape married - Winsome Vane, a relation to Romilda. Also, is Grace Fotheringray related to Elsie? I seem to remember Elsie's parents having the same surname, however Elsie's parents were strictly against sending Elsie to Hogwarts. So who is this fifth year Fotheringray? |
![]() ![]() ![]() While you talk of 6th degree cousins, you are way off. A) people marry friends and your average friend is, according to a genetic study, as closely related to you as a 4th degree cousin. Not a surprise when one realizes that friends are made of people who think like you and relatives inherit the same genetic predisposition and cultural background to do just that. B) Outbreeding is a thing, going too far outside results in incompatibilities between the organs as they don't quite fit all together. C) Despite popular opinion to the contrary, the closer you are related the more children you tend to have. Incest though is too close and causes higher rates of stillbirths. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHHH I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY INSTANTLY! I really want to see harry and hermione’s wedding and more of their moments! Please more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forget which HP story it was but Harry got pissed at Mrs. Weasley for sending him a howler and learned that the longer you put magic into a howler, the louder it is. So he overcharged it before sending it and both the adult Weasleys had their eardrums blown out by the howler and Mr. Weasley took away her howler paper and forbade her from sending out another howler, or else be thrown out of the family by him. It's also amusing that you thought this was going to be a relatively short tale and you're up to 38 chapters so far. Thanks for the laughs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I've always thought JKR had a major brain malfunction when she created the canon pairings and the names of Harry's male kids. Thanks for breaking up the canon pairings. |