I don't understand the tone of the story.

I think you should read/watch/play the source material again before you butcher the characters to fit into whatever this is.

The chapters are too short.
The punctuation and grammar is good.

This has got to be the most stupid and unrealistic premise of a story I've read this year.

Why don't you just have Link and Zelda cut off their own heads for peace and have 'not everything as it seems'.

It'd make as much sense.

First of all, I dont watch or play the LoZ so I dont know much. But the Botw series has interested me. I would like for Zeldas child to maybe try and escape Ganon or maybe even be the one to kill him. I'd be cool if he/she had the triforce of power and wisdom, like Link and Zelda.