Reviews for The Chariot
Ruby chapter 1 . 1/2
HARRY WILL DIE in the last chapter.
SEQUEL is incomplete and goes nowhere.
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 20 . 10/31/2015
Sequel here I come~~~
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 14 . 10/31/2015
Well you made me cry. A lot. Are you happy author? Next chapter would be more angstier I guess.
Wish I could push Malfoy off the astronomy tower.
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 13 . 10/31/2015
Argggghhh MALFOYYYY YOU . . . .!
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 11 . 10/31/2015
I don't want him to hurt Harry . . . Please don't do anything stupid Draco.
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 10 . 10/31/2015
Fuck you Malfoy.
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 9 . 10/31/2015
I love you Karina. This chapter's ending was perfect.
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 4 . 10/30/2015
Blaise is a dude!
You could have used Astoria or Daphne Greengrass :
Mif chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
To anybody who's going to read this, Harry will die in the last chapter. There is a sequel but it is not completed if you want to go for closure.
TheCauldron chapter 20 . 2/11/2015
*chokes* now I know why my friend always gets so upset when I have ideas for stories without a happy ending... *sobbing*
Guest chapter 20 . 12/5/2014
Guest chapter 20 . 6/23/2014
now now. Potter's dead? and I wasted two days n one night reading it/ I am not a fan of oh-so-happy endings but I definitely don't look forward to the death of HARRY POTTER in a HP fanfic. Twisted eh? I know its written back in 2003 n now its 2014. but, You c'd have kept him alive. Sorry, but clearly disappointed. Never mind. Btw, Zabini is clearly a guy. Don't know why so many people confuse it. Atta boy!
Yinzer Reader chapter 20 . 3/11/2014
I enjoyed your story very much and look forward to reading the sequel. You write Draco very well.

Maybe at the end of chaper 20 add an author's note about the sequel? That way there are less WTF moments.
Plainj117 chapter 20 . 3/1/2014
Aurora1991 chapter 6 . 10/30/2013
i really like this story so far, but i have to ask, why did you make zabini a girl? did you just not know he was a boy, or was it on purpose? it just sounds so wrong reading "she" when talking about blaise...
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