Reviews for Face On the Milk Carton |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was soooooo good! I loved everything in this book! You did such an amazing job! Thank you for sharing this with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow fantastic story, thanks for creating it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Thanks for sharing. Snarky Hermione is the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. It is well written and fun. The errors that bothered me were few, and previously mentioned so no reason to call them out. Thank you, and I would love to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story immensly. It is now a part of my favs. Just one small hiccup to fix. Some of the names need to be dou le checked. I notived during thr story where a character will have a certain middle or first name and then chapters later the name was change. Like Narcissa's and Theo's middle names and Pansy's father's first name. But those are just small changes. Otherwise, amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() anyone else get weird spacing during this chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione refers to herself as Hermione Granger and not Malfoy. I’m not sure if was intentional or not but I wanted to let you know. I’m enjoying the story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved every minute reading this story 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm re-reading your story while I recover from surgery, and it's honestly such a nice blend of drama, teen angst and delightful romance. Nonetheless, I wanted to leave a note for this chapter specifically. Narcissa's reaction to Draco and Hermione's bickering at the end of the chapter is so precious! It made me grin. So, thanks for a thoroughly enjoyable revisit to this inventive lttle tangent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stunning. Smashing. This was a fun ride, to be sure, and I am SO HAPPY Petunia got a chance for reconciliation. That made me misty, it did. Adding to Favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! Chop 'im up! Burn 'im down! So much for your so-called immortality, Tom! Yeah, conjuring Fiendfyre again after all she went through had to be exhausting. So ... how many DEs did we dispatch here, hmm? Lots? Most of them? All the truly dangerous ones, hopefully? Lestrange better be one of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Did you think I meant monkeys?" Heh. Hermione in sarcasm mode makes me grin. She's going to be awesome as Minister for Magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So ... Fluffy ... O, my teeth! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! "They Won" Just perfection. (gives a chef's kiss) |