Reviews for Watching Jaune Again!
infinitydrivex chapter 3 . 6/6
You really need to read what you’re writing before you post it. I get you’re not writing an actual fanfiction but you should know that you need to keep the names to the mixed universe you created instead of flipping back-and-forth between the original and fiction. Keep using the canon characters names instead of the RWBY characters names you’re also confused genders and everything else.
infinitydrivex chapter 3 . 6/6
When Qrow asks The Creator how Tai became king the Creator tells him Tai was a hero to the people after the previous queen died. But in the same explanation, without changing who he’s adressing, says “It worked to stop the war, then YOU married you’re lover IN Summer and had two babies named Ruby and Yang”. Now either Qrow is the father of Ruby and Yang or you forgot who the Creator was talking to. Also because you used the word in before Summer it implies the season not the character.
infinitydrivex chapter 2 . 6/6
But how would he survive all the hits he takes in initiation, combat class, etc. without aura. And I know you said Pyrrha ex machina, but You seem to be forgetting shit she can’t be everywhere at once. This is proven by the fact that card and was able to bully Jaune at all without getting flung into a wall every time. And she couldn’t exactly use her semblance to start the hits he takes from being less deadly because then it would be very obvious something is going on. As in people would realize cheating is occurring. Also in combat class they have Aura readers so that they never go below red and have their Auras break. And if Glenda notice he didn’t have aura one or two things will happen she would try to have them expelled for lying about his transcript or awake and his Aura so he wouldn’t die from things most Huntsman can tank all day.
keybladelight chapter 20 . 5/8
Do fate/zero to heaven's feel there his a fan art of a ruby alter and I think jaune should play the role of shirou and pyrrha the role of sakura.

Please do fate series that you mention the zero saga and heaven's feel saga.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/22
Thundertrooper planet wars dont tell me this is star wars amd stormtrooper rwby rip off version
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6
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Guest chapter 21 . 3/5
Saber Ruby is not a good a idea. I could see Jaune as saber though. He’s a knight, and of a prominent family apperently. Also I’m 90% sure he is going to get the sword of destruction eventually so it’s like an excalibur equivalent.

Or even shirou. If you do heavens feel he can stab whoever is saber like he did penny lol.
keybladelight chapter 21 . 2/20
I would recommend that you show the fate/zero and Heaven's Feel route mostly Heaven's Feel I have seen in Google Image a fan art of ruby rose alter like saber alter I would love to see ruby be evil alter.
Mikhail Sharon chapter 21 . 2/19
It has been a pleasure. Good day to you sir.
wearedeadpool chapter 21 . 2/18
that ToAru one sounds interesting.
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 19 . 2/16
"what a chad" Fucking hell. You are so painfully American sounding
Guest chapter 21 . 2/4
the roles for the Sherlock Holmes movies are fucking stupid Jaune is not an eccentric genius Adam is a psycho Cinder is the opposite of Irene and Ozpin is the opposite of Moriarty(why tho the role for him is obvious Watts is an evil doctor, him as an evil maths proffessor makes sense)
yahyazrioualaa chapter 21 . 2/3
I want fate unlimited blade works route or heaven feel, you can make shirou as Jaune or saber as Jaune, of course you can make ruby as shirou and Jaune as saber, or you can make your own plot.
Guest chapter 21 . 2/3
The world isn't fate/zero, Fate/Zero was a prequel made after Fate/Stay Night which is a section of the Nasuverse. I'd recommend referring to it as the Fate Verse from here on, cause some people are kinda sensitive over the topic. This isn't me being mad, just wanted to tell you.
XxGreenDemonxX chapter 1 . 2/3
123ABIR123 ayo dude wtf he just said hes done bro
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