| Reviews for Watching Jaune Again! |
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   15mmsa51 chapter 9 . 9/7 i really love this story . it most other rwby react stories it just seem that they have no growrh as character |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/14 what a fucking cringe |
| darkdraco0021 chapter 12 . 3/15 Aww. Jaune won't get raven ? Good sofar |
| The Richmaster chapter 12 . 3/8 Great chapter; i loved how you wrote all the fights here, especially the second |
| 50 blessings chapter 12 . 2/3 jaune |
| chickenlas chapter 10 . 12/22/2022 What's the fanfic in chapter 10 |
| Tanya von Degurechaff chapter 17 . 9/16/2022 neat, not all reaction fic include the effect to RWBY plot. |
| Hecseferblade chapter 6 . 8/3/2022 Hahahaha! I’m on chapter 6 and I know exactly how that last story ends. Love your spin on it. Woulda been hilarious if they had found out it’s a pRank and call them stupid since they are young adults and went through highschool, plus Jaune has 6 sisters. Still love the ending bit. Especially Raven’s reactions. |
| infinitydrivex chapter 3 . 6/6/2022 You really need to read what you’re writing before you post it. I get you’re not writing an actual fanfiction but you should know that you need to keep the names to the mixed universe you created instead of flipping back-and-forth between the original and fiction. Keep using the canon characters names instead of the RWBY characters names you’re also confused genders and everything else. |
| infinitydrivex chapter 3 . 6/6/2022 When Qrow asks The Creator how Tai became king the Creator tells him Tai was a hero to the people after the previous queen died. But in the same explanation, without changing who he’s adressing, says “It worked to stop the war, then YOU married you’re lover IN Summer and had two babies named Ruby and Yang”. Now either Qrow is the father of Ruby and Yang or you forgot who the Creator was talking to. Also because you used the word in before Summer it implies the season not the character. |
| infinitydrivex chapter 2 . 6/6/2022 But how would he survive all the hits he takes in initiation, combat class, etc. without aura. And I know you said Pyrrha ex machina, but You seem to be forgetting shit she can’t be everywhere at once. This is proven by the fact that card and was able to bully Jaune at all without getting flung into a wall every time. And she couldn’t exactly use her semblance to start the hits he takes from being less deadly because then it would be very obvious something is going on. As in people would realize cheating is occurring. Also in combat class they have Aura readers so that they never go below red and have their Auras break. And if Glenda notice he didn’t have aura one or two things will happen she would try to have them expelled for lying about his transcript or awake and his Aura so he wouldn’t die from things most Huntsman can tank all day. |
| keybladelight chapter 20 . 5/8/2022 Do fate/zero to heaven's feel there his a fan art of a ruby alter and I think jaune should play the role of shirou and pyrrha the role of sakura. Please do fate series that you mention the zero saga and heaven's feel saga. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/22/2022 Thundertrooper planet wars dont tell me this is star wars amd stormtrooper rwby rip off version |
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| Guest chapter 21 . 3/5/2022 Saber Ruby is not a good a idea. I could see Jaune as saber though. He’s a knight, and of a prominent family apperently. Also I’m 90% sure he is going to get the sword of destruction eventually so it’s like an excalibur equivalent. Or even shirou. If you do heavens feel he can stab whoever is saber like he did penny lol. |