|Reviews for The Sun of Sunyshore|
| runelt99 chapter 33 . 10/17
Pog, it's all coming together.
| keht.jelicho chapter 2 . 10/15
hmm I wonder if rotom-based and/or Porygon-z powered pokemon translators could be a thing?
| keht.jelicho chapter 2 . 10/15
it has also occurred to me that the League could renovate the Lighthouse and make It be the Gym, then Volkner can be Both the Light keeper and the Gym leader
| keht.jelicho chapter 1 . 10/15
so... if he really wants to get fired/not be a gym leader he can just refuse to give out badge/only battle with his main team/constantly demolish all challengers. Eventually he'll either get replaced/fired or someone will come along and beat him even when he goes all out with main team and then he can just go "OK you beat me now You're the gym leader" and just "forcefully" take over the lighthouse and refuse to go back (after all if he is really that loved I doubt whoever is there currently/whoever owns it or whatever will oppose him, and if they did he could always threaten to leave to find another lighthouse somewhere else.. or build his own like Bill in Kanto)
| Irina Akashira chapter 1 . 10/13
Your story is interesting
Anyway, I can't accept your Volkner's actions, and the flashbacks miss some key details
Chronollogically first, if as this Kayla said, being a gym leader is the biggest honour, and implied never anyone "have rejected" the position, I seriosly doubt that the president hadprepared blackmail material in their first encounter to force him to accept the place
Jasmine said in chapter 15, that the MC would can have refused the gym leader position, which imply that it doesn't exist a law forcing people to take the place. Also if it was to exist a law forcing him to take the position, blackmail material would be worthless
I think that much more people would can have deduced that he was threatened
Or other chance, if it has been implied, never anyone had "rejected" the position before, they aren't sure about how much can be "legally" forced
And last, with the deal, in all these 7 years, the president seeing that she will be unable to control him, didn't ever tried to find a "potential" replace, and it was Volkner to present him, as Riley
She wouldn't have needed to reveal about the blackmail or latter deal to justify search a substitute, because several people knew that Volkner was being anoying about not wishing to be a gym leader, so search a substitute would have been perfectly credible
For this reason
If I would have been in your MC's place
I'm not sure if I would have refused the position at first, for the orphanage's matter
But latter once seen that the threat was a bluff or worthless, I would have simply refused to do the work, till the pressure finally would have forced the government to "fire me"
I think that a detention and trial is unlikely. Othercase they would risk that I was to declare the president threatened me, and with the psychics pokemon read both minds, confirming to be true
| GuyGamer chapter 23 . 10/2
Wow, I wasn't expecting team rocket to be the good guys
| Tony McNucklz chapter 30 . 9/11
I found myself... rooting for the Iceman. It feels like this entire story got turned on it's head, that Rocket is right to wage war, and rooting for Iceman to kill the tyrant in his way. That was a bizarre shift. After his story, I can't help wanting Proton to win. Shit.
| Tony McNucklz chapter 24 . 9/11
Haven't read your other pokemon stories, but I'm guessing Vera and the Rocket informant are two of the other characters? I like the concept of the different characters in the same world. It's sort of like what Marvel did with the MCU, having different characters whose stories parallel and intersect.
| Tony McNucklz chapter 2 . 9/6
This story is both well thought out and deep while also being a good laugh. Well done.
| Caliberious chapter 20 . 8/27
Very happy he's a free man, now is it travels or will Galactic track him down
| Hellboybu chapter 15 . 8/12
the mc is a simp
| Hellboybu chapter 1 . 8/1
wtf he can just quit! i would!
| Megamink23 chapter 33 . 7/19
I decided to read the entire story so far before making my review here, but let me say this first and foremost. I LOVE THIS STORY. I have read a few stories in the fandom but this is one of the best I have read, your stories that i have read so far are a little exposition and inner monologue heavy, but that's honestly fine. I love your version of Volkner, even though it is technically an OC, this really isn't far off from my own view of the actual character, and inspires me to maybe in the future write a story of my own about Volkner, most likely an origin story of the character that goes through his life from his beginnings to maybe when the player meets him in the pearl diamond and platinum games. I love the idea that while he is an eletric type specialist, he has more than just electric types, which the games have also shown. I love the Jasmine and Volkner ship, one I never considered before, but they are really similar people. I also like how active this version of Volkner is, especially when it comes to crime and stomps out the crime in his region, which honestly I think he should have played a bigger role in the games, but i think that of all gym leaders honestly. The idea of him being a master of the Magnet rise move is one i really like, especially since it's nice reference to his Japanese name Denki, which partly means Electro Magnetism. Also Nice reference to Pokemon Adventures with ZapMolCuno, it's a really nice callback especially since if I remember correctly team Rocket tried to the fuse Kantonian Birds in that story too. And the idea that Team Rocket and Team Galactic working together to create the master ball is a Brilliant idea, one i absolutely love. it honestly explains why you more often than not get the masterball in the enemy team's base or at their last stand, like in silph co. or team aqua or magma's hideout in sapphire, ruby, and emerald. of course the bug companies in the gamez are likely the ones that made it but still. love it. and Im sad for the pokemon that were lost especially Toss, we were just getting to know em too. Anyways, great chapter and brilliant story. you will see my reviews on your other pokemon fics as soon as i get caught up on them. take care.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/19
I don't know why people find being an asshole to your partner funny but it isn't.
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/18
I hope she's alright and not paralyzed like what happened to Mary. They've been through so much shit in the last chapters, honestly.