god this story turned to absolute garbage so fuckign fast its ridiculous. stop railroading into exact copies of canon events, its obnoxious.

cmon man, stop ripping off canon events almost word for word. the story was going so well, then you started doing shit like that...

yay, i like grumpy but not permanently an asshole snape. he seems more like an actual person like this.

i kinda want the sorting to be weird as hell, like throw ron in hufflepuff, dudley and neville into gryffindor, and harry and hermione into ravenclaw. just fuck up canon as much as possible, ya know? i love when the sortings get wacky instead of just lazily lumping everyone into gryffindor.

Why did Remus need to spend the night in Harry's room? Couldn't he have stayed in the guest room Marge uses?

Your book was was amazing and astounding. I hope your muse returns soon so you can continue feeding my addiction of magical delights

bonne fic!

Mentally unsound has no place on the Wizengamot, huh? In that case that body of magical governence should be pretty empty.:D

I forgot how stubborn Tina Polkis is about wanting to do whatever Hermione tries, and setting herself up to be in competition with Hermione to be the best witch for Harry over Hermione. Now I'm picking up how it's as though Tina didn't really accept Hermione into Dudley 'sHarry's original group of primary school friends.

This is a third timeroughlyreading this story. And I still don't know why you didn't have Petunia seek out Wiccan shops to refresh her potion ingredients once she discovered she was unable to access Diagon Alley.?

Chapter 10 Snape is actually reasonable. Before that he was the Snape we knew and "loved" from canon.

if you're referring to ice cream it's SundAE not AY

Rita does a hatchet job on the family, and they reward her. That is something I cannot get over. My loss.

Dumbledore finally meeting Ms. Acacia. Should be interesting. A sh*tshow, but interesting.

Ron as a snake. Been done before, but this is a fresh look at the whole Harry with Dursleys.