Reviews for Harry Potter and the Magical Guardian |
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maiqsmail chapter 39 . 1/21/2024 Damn, and I *almost* relaxed on Dumbdumb and he went and throw that memory charm. |
maiqsmail chapter 26 . 1/20/2024 More exposition on backlash from liberating Sirius, so far all we have is POVs of people involved. I wanna the magical society reaction on that. |
maiqsmail chapter 19 . 1/20/2024 Meh, I fully expected them to bankrupt the Dumbdumb, not just "understandable, have a nice day". He still used up money that weren't his and could recompense. |
maiqsmail chapter 7 . 1/19/2024 I was disappointed because all sortings were same as canon, Duds predictably landed in Puffs, but the hilarious part with the Weasel ending up a snake has just about made up for all that. |
Tracy Bair chapter 43 . 12/20/2023 loved I mean loved your story. I hope your muse returns to finish this excellent entertaining tale. Tracy |
LoneWolfAndCub chapter 4 . 11/27/2023 Gotta love it when Tuney Dursley is out for blood, Dumbledore played FAnFO. |
bobthebuilding chapter 42 . 10/11/2023 Ugh, and that ruined the story for me. A magical potion that can grant squib-ness is utterly absurd and against canon, the entire point of the pureblood "they're stealing our magic" bullsh*t is that it ISN'T true, and this kind of twist destroys a huge point of the themes of Harry Potter. So, I am utterly dropping this fic. |
bobthebuilding chapter 28 . 10/10/2023 Gotta be honest, this fic would be 1000x better without this Tina brat in it. It's a great story, but I find myself wincing every time Tina shows up because I know it's gonna be a drag. |
bobthebuilding chapter 17 . 10/9/2023 Remus didn't recognize Scabbers as Wormtail? |
bobthebuilding chapter 6 . 10/9/2023 Lol previous reviewer: it might not be common for children to argue about snakes being venomous not poisonous, but it certainly *is* the kind of thing Hermione would go out of her way to correct someone about lmao. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/1/2023 Yes, of course, it's completely normal for two 11-year-olds to argue whether a snake is poisonous or venomous. The inability to properly write children is very common in fanfiction, but you are partibularly bad at it. |
Tulugaq chapter 33 . 9/30/2023 I’m getting kinda tired of the Tina character taking up so much storytime. Also there have been no big plot moves at all. It feels as if Voldemort and Dumbledore has disappeared from the story and Harry is turning into a side character. |
Tulugaq chapter 30 . 9/30/2023 Skeeter is scum |
Tulugaq chapter 28 . 9/30/2023 Tina is kinda creeping me out. Shes kinda getting set up as an enemy and betrayer. |
Jimbocous chapter 43 . 9/27/2023 Thanks for a great read! Very Nicely done. |