good story

I thought this was fantastic. I really enjoyed the pacing

Back again for another read. Being honest, it’s been a while since I read the original books. Having said that I still love the interactions between Roran and Brom in this version. I’ll probably speed through this and the other fics, but this was the first and it’s nice being able to SEE the evolution of a writing style from the beginning.

"Maybe you could start with how you could feel me touching your mind. Or how your mind feels 30 years older than it was the last time we met." Well that was one way to break the ice.

"25 years older actually." My answer caused Brom to literally pause what he was doing for a second. "I don't know is the answer to your first question."

Brom sat my tea down on the table between us. Zar'roc was in the kitchen forgotten. "How is it that your mind became 25 years older?"

"That is another answer I do not have. What I do know is that I fell asleep exactly 3 nights ago and woke up the next day with another life's memories."

Chapter 1, and the author has already made a critical mistake.
Rule number one of reincarnation and transmigration: NEVER tell anyone about it.
And in the same chapter, you tell him you know the future due to these memories? Cringe.

rofl soo bad dude

Super funny to find your page again after reading conqueror last year!

... She hatched the night before and is now the size of two horses... One of the worst scenes in the movie is when she flies off itty bitty and comes back full grown... She grew in the books over months of hiding and travel...

Galbatorix dies way better in this story than in canon.

Although I liked the story and the end, I feel like the victory over Galbatorix was bit underdemonstrated. I was certain that what Roran felt like was the victory was just Galbatorix showing him an illusion, which was why the gem was heating up. Also, there should have been a dragon for Roran at the end, only Arya having one makes it kind of weird tbh.

this was very good fic
i read it in one siting
very well done

I binged this story in one 24hr period and I love it. personally I always enjoy a good SI that shakes things up and switches the plot up, it makes a boring retelling very lively and far more interesting! I love the fact that you aren't afraid to kill people off or put the character in a situation where everything changes or to keep people that should die alive. his being honest of his origin was also pretty refreshing and I loved that. I have seen so many stories where writers have a character threaten a main character that's repeatedly causing issues but nothing actually happens and the troublesome character keeps crossing the line without repercussions. in here there were repercussions. I saw this as well in your Harry Potter fiction and you did an amazing job there as well. I also enjoy the strive to improve ones self that I see a lot in your fics because of thier fore knowledge. like, why wouldn't you if you knew what was coming? the betrayal of the elf queen and nasuada was awesome too. logically it made sense when you put it in perspective as for the how's and why's. you did a good job showcasing Broms and Eragon's reaction to Rorans bid for power and thier reactions to it. Hrothgar's crotchety old dwarf ways and shrewdness was awesome as well. despite messing up the name for that one werecat, everything else was EXTREMELY consistent which I almost never see which was awesome since a lot of people forget the details of thier own writing but this wasn't an issue at all which was astonishing. I have probably over 1,500 fanfics I have read in my library and I can say with certainly that you are in the top 1% of people that has managed this much less in multiple fics, so kudos. also, every story of yours I have read thus far reaches the same quality which is pretty amazing. you do a good job taking criticism and do your best to learn from it which is all we as writers can really do. in a word, amazing. Good job! p.s. I don't usually leave reviews, I'm afraid I'm more of a lurker but this one (and more) were amazing enough to prompt me to leave you one. p.p.s this is written from my phone please ignore the grammatical errors that come from typing on a tiny keyboard p.p.p.s if you need a beta, hit me upI might not be the best writer but I can edit well enough

Loved this SI! Great job I think. I don’t know that it stuck to all the established rules but a few were bound to break when you have someone from another world present. Loved it!

Really loving this so far, I’m not sure Vanir would be the one to skin the stag though. I feel like this could have been done by Roran himself or the Werecat

great story. my only regret is that roran didn't became a dragon rider at the end of the story

Will you do another IC fic? I love your writing, and though I like the OP, ASoIaF and naruto fics Eragon really holds a special place in my heart.