Reviews for Harry Potter gets smart and takes control - the goblet
Guest chapter 15 . 9/5
Sinceridade, não vejo como Harry vai escapar, completamente inútil este capítulo em relação com o título .
Guest chapter 11 . 9/4
Tá decepcionante essa história.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/3
Que enrolação..., E como se estivesse dando voltas e não se chega a um denominador, frustrante...
Guest chapter 58 . 8/22
The way it's described, with even Goblin children being able to make it? Snake fingers sounds like the Goblin equivalent of chicken tendies~ XD
Beth1112 chapter 91 . 8/15
I really enjoyed the story
Guest chapter 21 . 6/30
Please update
Harry Malfoy9397 chapter 91 . 5/26
This is brilliant...a few misused words here and there, but brilliant all the same. I hope you come back with more chapters soon.
Calmzone1 chapter 90 . 5/25
What a wonderful story. I’m so glad I had the chance to start over again. Well worth multiple readings. :)

I hope you are doing alright. PTSD sucks the life out of you. And leaves you with no energy. Or too much.

But I hope you find some peace and serenity.
Thanks for sharing. :)
It’s around 2 years since you last posted, so, I’m concerned. :)
DaveC chapter 86 . 3/22
Well I’m glad that is over
GenieM chapter 91 . 3/19
I look forward to reading more of the story. It is very good. I look forward to seeing malfoy srs face when he finds out the truth! He he he!
DaveC chapter 62 . 3/16
Filch why isn’t Harry slap him one he knew filch is a squib and not very scary at all and as to being dragged to me it would be deserving of a good hex. See you put Harry up with the great but you disregard his powers. Doe’s that mean Harry is just useless, if so then why the story?
DaveC chapter 55 . 3/15
Why does gayness have to raise it’s head in nearly all the books I choose to read online ( i only read HP) it does spoil many a storyline, and complaining makes me out to be some gay hating deamon. Well im not but I would like to have warnings that are loud and clear so that I look for stories elsewhere. A good story if we lost the attraction of Bill and Charlie. Now I may be wrong but this is only as far as I have read, keep at it.

dave .uk
DaveC chapter 43 . 3/12
Hi now why not get rid of Ron, he could get furious with Hermione and as she walks away Ron say’s the first thing that come into his head. As Hermione walks away from Ron he lifts his wand and say’s the adva Cava and shoots at Hermione, unfortunately he’s misses and the curse rebounds of a mirror and shoots in to Ron and killing him. Peace can then return to Gryffindor.
DaveC chapter 33 . 3/9
What’s with all this hugging your making Harry into a weak person
DaveC chapter 28 . 3/7
I hope that you have now stopped bringing Harry down and that you will soon write his revenge and make it good. There’s not much you can do about mob rule, but the ring leaders can be punished and as for Dumbledore well I hope he gets his in the hall in front of everybody and is brought down.

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