|Reviews for The Wars of Legends 1 - The Apotheosis of a Lost Child|
| Fallow57 chapter 13 . 2/22
xXxX KUDOS XxXx : )
| PappyOldGuy chapter 13 . 2/8
Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.
Thank you so much for sharing.
| PappyOldGuy chapter 1 . 2/8
A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.
Thanks for sharing!
| WhiteElfElder chapter 13 . 1/18
Nice world development; while it was rushed in some ways, it was done well. You have to wonder how much Voldemort will regret his actions from the future when time syncs back up?
| WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 1/18
Has Harriet somehow managed to partially ascend?
| WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 1/18
I am surprised Voldemort did not try to gain the Potter assets by making Harriet become his wife in some other ritual first.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/16/2020
Looking forward to the next chapter
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2020
A gun will beat a wand most of the time
| BlackWarth chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
Your point of female character in Isekai non suffering consequences come off as bullshit to me, because even if true it shouldn't have applied to this situation.
You would have had a point if your MC was a normal modern day girl, but she wasn't. You forcefully and artificially made her helpless because if she was her normal self she would have been able to defend herself.
Instead of adding realism the rape felt like a blunt instrument to add forced Drama, especially because of all the contrivances needed to reach that point.
| partezane chapter 1 . 10/30/2019
| amyrlinengineer chapter 13 . 10/6/2019
I've actually read this twice now; once while posting and once again once the whole series was released. I've got to say, I love this series. Nimue is awesome.
| DALucifer13 chapter 6 . 10/3/2019
Nimue thought before playfully adding, "Why not make the symbol be a fancy sword called Excalibur?" "I'll be sure to credit you for it if I ever use it," Moros told her with a grin. Like that'll ever happen.
| HellsMaji chapter 3 . 10/1/2019
I sure as hell hope she goes back to kill her rapist.
| HellsMaji chapter 2 . 10/1/2019
So she's smart enough to try to kill her "husband" with a knife, but dumb enough not to do it while he sleeps?
| Serafina Fairway chapter 13 . 8/9/2019
I keep getting update notifications for this, since I use the app instead of a browser. Is something being edited?