|Reviews for The Wars of Legends 1 - The Apotheosis of a Lost Child|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
A gun will beat a wand most of the time
| BlackWarth chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
Your point of female character in Isekai non suffering consequences come off as bullshit to me, because even if true it shouldn't have applied to this situation.
You would have had a point if your MC was a normal modern day girl, but she wasn't. You forcefully and artificially made her helpless because if she was her normal self she would have been able to defend herself.
Instead of adding realism the rape felt like a blunt instrument to add forced Drama, especially because of all the contrivances needed to reach that point.
| partezane chapter 1 . 10/30/2019
| amyrlinengineer chapter 13 . 10/6/2019
I've actually read this twice now; once while posting and once again once the whole series was released. I've got to say, I love this series. Nimue is awesome.
| DALucifer13 chapter 6 . 10/3/2019
Nimue thought before playfully adding, "Why not make the symbol be a fancy sword called Excalibur?" "I'll be sure to credit you for it if I ever use it," Moros told her with a grin. Like that'll ever happen.
| HellsMaji chapter 3 . 10/1/2019
I sure as hell hope she goes back to kill her rapist.
| HellsMaji chapter 2 . 10/1/2019
So she's smart enough to try to kill her "husband" with a knife, but dumb enough not to do it while he sleeps?
| Serafina Fairway chapter 13 . 8/9/2019
I keep getting update notifications for this, since I use the app instead of a browser. Is something being edited?
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/9/2019
Oof. A mortal beating several ascended beings, I skimmed that, almost left the story.
Then I see you delete reviews you disagree with, I honestly almost didn't post this as you'll probably call it flaming, based on that.
But seriously, overpowering the ascended beings was stupid as shit, I'll pretend it didn't happen, and hope it doesn't happen again.
| hinaamaple chapter 6 . 8/1/2019
Lol, I havent finished this chapter but I had to comment. Nimue has truly made herself as the "Lady of the Lake" with her suggestion of excalibur to Merlin.
I also wanted to say earlier it is interesting making her a Gould Queen, its something I havent seen down before and has several interesting outcomes that I hadn't thought of before. I am interested to see what they get from her. Will her children be like the Tokra? Will they get her memories or maybe more, like her magic. Cant wait to see how things progress. Please continue this story!
| Zaralann chapter 13 . 7/19/2019
| Romily chapter 9 . 7/14/2019
I stop reading here now.
It is no slight on your writing or anything, it is just that i like a HP-Stargate xover to actually have elements of those in it.
I am not firm enough in the goaould-verse to have an idea if this is accurate, bit when you started with voldemort trying to defy the prophecy i wasn‘t expecting reading through millenia of history before sg1 and hp.
I am not really interested in this or the relationship harry has with Ganos so i might read sequels when you reach the point i am interested in and hopefully i understand what‘s going on just knowing Harry is now a female ascended goa‘ould - system lady or even more powerful- reshaping the universe to be with her beloved again...
Not sure i will like the story if it ever gets to wizarding britain, since i have no idea where you are heading, but i am ready to give it a try then.
| k4m3j0 chapter 13 . 7/11/2019
Its complete?! Why? Theres still 6000 years of story time
| imortis chapter 13 . 7/10/2019
Is this going to get a sequel? I really really would like to see it get a sequel.
| The Shadows Mistress chapter 13 . 7/9/2019
nice slice of life stories added to the other, look forward to more of them