this story is great a masterpiece

I found this because it has max Payne in it but he hasn’t appeared since chapter 3 more max please!

love your story, I hope it gets updated soon

Just reread this story! Totally love this story. Love all the ways you weave all these different characters. Love the Q Compound reference.

Big Boss is great and I love that Hudson is around. Hope to see what happens next. If you're still writing this story. Keep up the good work!

More! This is great! Love all the crossover characters! You made it all flow and I love it!

Love your Work and looking forward for more in the future. BTW, Will Russell Adler along with other Black Ops Cold War appear in Future Chapter along with Ghost Recon like Mitchell, Kozak and Nomad?

I'm loving this. I really enjoy the cross fandom characters, and look forward to any more that would be added.
Was thinking jormungand and/or black lagoon for the future would be a fun addition.

This a awesome story

The Shawarma joint is so Avenger style. So what the Title of the twins foto in the paper? Quirkless Young Soldier Twins Beat Mysterious and Legendary PMC in a Night Gunfight

You should have them get a little offended when someone calls them mercenaries. Contractors and mercenaries are similar, but unlike mercenaries, contractors still are obligated to abide by the laws of the host nations, and they are tied to a legitimate company and usually also have their loyalties with their base country.

Wow. This FF is a banger lol XD. Immediately followed and favorited

First of all, in chapter one, putting a pair of 8 year olds in a war zone?
That was pretty sick, man.

In this chapter, where their doing military work at 14.

Japan's child labor laws state that one can't participate in employment until age 15. Especially not military employment.

And where are the sprinkles of comedy that we expect from the MHA franchise?

Sorry, this story just isn't for me. I hope you understand.

in chapter 1 you wrote that Inko was born in 2315
in this chapter you wrote that Max was born in 2209
at the start of the chapter its written that the date is 2256.
you need to get your years and time straight.

I like how I was represented through Iida calling Izu and Ikki friends, because he didn't know them, but his new friends clearly did and wanted to start off with a good first impression.

Why do you use present tense for dialogue and past tense for narration, stick with one tense don’t switch back and forth