Reviews for Dominion of My Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() But we're not their yet. Jacob and Jane worry me. And the fact that Jacob Will likely be there to witness the marriage night. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love that things are going well for the pair. Although I still think we could have trouble ahead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not trusting Jane or Jacob. So much can happen before the wedding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't say I'm surprised. She does carry herself well. Jane is so desperate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I didn't like Jane from the one shot, I most certainly do like like her from this chapter. Seems bella doesn't think to highly of Jacob. Can't say I blame her. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I going over fics I need to read. I even re read dominion first. Just to remind myself of it. Looking forward to reading more. Nervous to see what Jane and Jacob could cock up between them both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect ending! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my heart! I cried with the name and then the final send off of the warriors. You did an amazing job. Very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was not expecting that. Now I want Jacob dead. Im kind of hoping Bella will be the one to kill him, but I don’t think it will happen. At least she got to help defend her people. I’m sad to see I’m close to the end. I’m really enjoying this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that you waited for them to say the "L" word. It gave them time to learn about each and actually grow as a couple. I was waiting for the moment. I it did not disappoint. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness. The ups the downs and up again. This story is so good. I can't wait to see the battle. But I hope we get to see a little more ExB time before. I enjoy seeing their relationship grow. And Carlisle...if her weren't the king I'm sure Edward would have killed him by now. LOL I'm also happy to see Jasper up and about. Edward knows just what to say. He will be a great king one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! It is official! This story has me hooked. And I am leaving off on a cliff hanger! I just want to continue but alas I have other obligations to attend to. I can't wait to continue on with this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh if he weren’t the king I think I’d slap him! He is a cold ruler indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! They’ve got him! I can’t wait to read what’s next! |