Reviews for Journey of a legend
LyraHollow chapter 3 . 5/6/2020
MORE!
LuxCranel00 chapter 3 . 1/21/2020
pls more update
Kimera20 chapter 3 . 12/23/2019
This story is awesome!
Ricardo753 chapter 2 . 12/22/2019
Is a Gary Stu...
Light Dark Mark 1999 chapter 3 . 12/22/2019
Hi,
Not to be rude but the Meowth in pokedex entry is Female.
You have named it as Male.
jurassicdinodrew chapter 3 . 12/22/2019
nice to have ya back, looking forward to see more of this, and i wonder if Pikachu and Mew will pair up in this... and i wonder if Ash will catch a female Eevee that can change into all of her Eeveeolutions and back again like how that mega evolution thing works, and i hope Ash does better on the gyms and leagues than he did in cannon too, good luck and keep up the good work.
Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 3 . 12/22/2019
Sweet beans in a basket
Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 2 . 7/11/2019
Nice work
jurassicdinodrew chapter 2 . 7/10/2019
nice work on this chapter, can't wait for more, and i hope Ash wins all the Pokemon leagues, from Kanto, to Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, Unova, Kalos and Alola, i also like that how you got Mew have a spot on Ash's shoulder like Pikachu does as she is the right size for it, can't wait for the next chapter to find out what's next for our hero, good luck and keep up the good work.
anarion87 chapter 2 . 7/10/2019
nice chapter
Stylepoints Zero chapter 1 . 6/22/2019
Are you this desperate for reviews that you let St review?
Blue Glass Spear chapter 1 . 6/22/2019
I tried to warn you. You just don't want to respond.

[ don’t watch the anime, so I’m not going to be able to review this story on content. Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it.]

I tried to warn you via pms but no. This user is lying. They have watched the anime and no one uses the world tag to search here.

[title needs to be fully capitalized.]

It is properly capitalized.

[might want to pick a more original title. There are quite literally thousands of titles in this category that are variations on, if not identical to, this one.]

This is a lie.

[Summaries should tell us more than just the genre. What is this event that's so important? What separates this story from the quite literally thousands of others with the same premise?]

Once again that is a plot summary. Secondly St wants you to literally tell us your whole story. And again there are not thousands of stories like this one.

[Ketchum" is also a name, and should be capitalized.]

Not really.

[guarantee you do not need a speech key]

You do.

[better if you separate your author notes with a horizontal line; otherwise, they look like part of the story. ]

Your author notes are bold. No one is this dumb.

[You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. ]

Pokemon names are not species names. Game Freak gone on record that they are proper nouns.

[You’re formatting dialogue incorrectly. Dialogue is written as [“Hello,” she said] or [“Hello!” she said], never [“Hello.” She said] or [“Hello,” She said] or [“Hello” she said] or [“Hello!” She said]. ]

This is false. Dialogue is a seperate sentence as such it is written as ("Hello," She said) or as ("Hello!" She yelled)

[You can add horizontal lines with the hr tag, or through the in-site editor.]

Don't do it. It ruins the reading.
St Elmo's Fire chapter 1 . 6/22/2019
I don’t watch the anime, so I’m not going to be able to review this story on content. Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it. Find your story under “Manage Stories” and select it from the dropdown menu that says “World: Any” in the “Category” section.

Your title needs to be fully capitalized.

You might want to pick a more original title. There are quite literally thousands of titles in this category that are variations on, if not identical to, this one.

[A single event can change someone's whole life. See how this single event changes the life of one Ash ketchum.]

Summaries should tell us more than just the genre. What is this event that's so important? What separates this story from the quite literally thousands of others with the same premise?

"Ketchum" is also a name, and should be capitalized.

I guarantee you do not need a speech key. If basic actions aren’t obvious from context, something has gone more wrong than a key can fix.

It’s better if you separate your author notes with a horizontal line; otherwise, they look like part of the story. You can do this through the in-site editor.

Titling chapters in the story itself looks kinda weird; the dropdown menu should suffice.

You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like trainer or professor or gym.

You’re formatting dialogue incorrectly. Dialogue is written as [“Hello,” she said] or [“Hello!” she said], never [“Hello.” She said] or [“Hello,” She said] or [“Hello” she said] or [“Hello!” She said]. This is because dialogue and speech tags are considered to be part of the same sentence, so they have to flow together. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb. In that case, the second part IS considered a separate sentence, so it’s written as [“Hello.” She grinned], never [“Hello,” she grinned]. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like “laughed” or “giggled” is in the second category. (“Speak” is also not a speech verb.) Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s [“Hi,” she said. “This is it.”] not [“Hi,” she said, “this is it.”] or [“Hi,” she said “this is it.”] And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s [“Hi. This,” she said, “is it.”] The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks (or single quotes) with thoughts. This is because quotation marks for thoughts make it look like your characters are talking out loud, which is confusing to the reader.

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Mark Andrew chapter 1 . 6/18/2019
Few words missing here and there, makes for slight freeze.
Otherwise interesting start. Will you have the starting age be 10? Or raise it to 13 or so like some stories do?
anarion87 chapter 1 . 6/20/2019
nice so far
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