Yeah, this may complicate things in any of the timelines.

Welp, that settles that.

"pussy spray"

Edelgrad is so hawt úwù. I ship Blyleth ans Edelgraf so much story made me so horny i love edelgrad id smash if I was a guy.

I want to fuck blyeth.

good shit

That was a fun story! I loved the idea and the size of it was fine, even though I would like to read more.
A couple of recomendations , if I may: I think you should take more time proof reading your stuff for spelling and unfinished sentences.

You misspelled Edelgard throughout most of this. It could’ve been more well written, but far from the worst fic i’ve read. I liked the ending writing and you’ll improve!

It's EdelgARd, not EdelgRAd. Thank you.