Reviews for Alita: Fallen Angel
VoidHunter146 chapter 1 . 10/20
Heard about this on the Alita Army stream. Really enjoying it so far.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/8
Update?
CalvinHobbesGatsby chapter 1 . 9/29
I am loving this story so much.
Tim chapter 9 . 7/16
This is one of the most well written fanfictions I've ever read, thanks for the time you spend to bring alita to life,
Keep it up!
TimEye97 chapter 6 . 11/1/2019
Excellent story and action. I fell in love with alita and have seen the movie around 15 times. And her character is captured brilliantly by this fanfic, well done.
BigBrainOnly chapter 6 . 10/28/2019
Wow this was a great chapter, so excited to see if you keep it up OK cool thanks for the update. Bye
BigBrainOnly chapter 5 . 10/26/2019
Hi Maxtac I just want to say great story I hope you continue updating it and just keep doing God's work keep it up you're awesome we believe in you you're the best I'll keep reading and hopefully you get many more people to review your story all right take care do your best we love you goodbye
Jfish chapter 5 . 10/26/2019
Hey Maxtac great story I'm glad you're still updating it with chapters but seriously man please don't give up on this I just caught the movie and a little bit of the anime and I'm just like now I got to know more and you're one of the only few authors out there doing God's work come on help us out fam be a great story you really good with the details alright peace.
MessengerFromElysium chapter 6 . 10/27/2019
By far, this is easily the most intense and exciting chapter that you've shown your readers – and I find this especially fitting for the chapter that intends on finishing the Motorball game with a thunderous applause.

I see in the introduction you've introduced Erica. Interesting. Depending on how much more you're willing to expand this story, though unlikely, I do wonder if you're going to introduce her to Yoko. I say this is unlikely, first, because Erica is busy handling things in Mars as a member of that Necro-soldier organization. Second, it's also unlikely in that Yoko and Erica don't meet again until "Mars Chronicle," which directly takes place after the culmination of "Last Order." You don't have to answer this. It's just that the excited, curious side of me is getting the best of me after having read this breathtaking chapter.

"Alita smiled back at him, yet he saw a haunting sadness in those big, brown eyes."

The way you concluded this chapter is thought-provoking, and I must say well done, in itself. Perhaps Alita, deep in the inside, is sad because she ultimately missed her ticket to be invited to Zalem despite making a draw with Jashugan (thus nullifying her title as "Final Champion"). But I do like how you don't make her reasoning of why she was sad explicit to the readers and instead make it subtle so that we can do the imagining and thinking ourselves on why she may feel that way.

Overall, splendid work as always – and best of luck in your next update, which I can't wait for!
nightwire chapter 5 . 10/20/2019
This is... so vast and dramatic!

Such a magnificent story!
MessengerFromElysium chapter 5 . 10/20/2019
Despite this chapter being shorter than expected, it is, I must say, spectacularly done. Next to the action scenes, the way you portray Alita's "feisty" side is a huge bonus for me.

The end scene with Alita finding herself in Mars is a rather interesting take-off as cliffhanger. I assume this is one of her encounters with her many adventurous flashbacks? Speaking about Mars, I do wonder if you're going to go through the "Mars Chronicle" manga route. Unless if you're willing to spill the beans, if not by just a little, I guess only time could tell at this point of time.

Solid work so far, and I eagerly await for the next update!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2019
Slight problem here. Your apostrophes and quotations are all wiped out. Thought I should let you know.
admiral809 chapter 4 . 9/20/2019
Did something happen to the punctuation marks?
powerstaark chapter 4 . 9/20/2019
You haven't used speech marks or apostrophes in this chapter. It makes it harder to read.
Tim chapter 3 . 9/17/2019
Very well written and leaving me wanting more
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