Reviews for Eventful Summer
SimplyAdventures chapter 1 . 10/4
Soraslove chapter 8 . 9/20
Did the stupid kids even remember protection? lol
animamonster22 chapter 14 . 7/29
Me encanta la historia
Abstract01 chapter 14 . 7/19
Decent story with somewhat reasonable, laisse-faire authoritarian figures.
the RonW character was obviously 'undeveloped', while others showed some growth.
Also appreciate the maturity of Sirius, and fulfilling his guardianship.

A sequel portraying the fifth school year without Umbridge (arrested), the souljar search, and Harry without a volde-headache would be interesting AU.
ak chapter 14 . 7/5
bonne fic!
LAB1 chapter 14 . 7/5
This story had good bones, but seemed quite rushed. I didn't feel like I got to enjoy their relationship development at all. As soon as the story started, then it ended. I guess I'll go search for a hopeful sequel!
Pepperonyfan1982 chapter 14 . 6/29
Rules for writers to follow
A sentence begins with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
Be conscious of correct spelling and word usage – a dictionary and a thesaurus are your best friends – and don't just rely on the internet for this, either because it isn't infallible.
The ideal length of a paragraph is 100–200 words with a maximum of five sentences. This allows the readers to get a good grasp of what the topic is about. An ideal paragraph consists of an introductory sentence, 2–3 supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence.
SYNTAX and CONTEXT matter
Punctuation doesn't just go where you think it goes, there are rules that need to be followed, learn them.
Before sitting down to write, please ensure that you know how to use homophones correctly. Each of two or more words having the same pronunciation but different meanings, origins, or spelling, for example new and knew, or to, too and two.
Be sure you comprehend when to use a SINGULAR word and when to use its PLURAL. womAN singular, womEN plural
There are such things as PARAGRAPH BREAKS, please, use them. Press return twice at the start of a paragraph and once at the end.
Spaces follow most punctuation, the only exception is the dash which has a space before AND after.
One space after a semicolon, comma and full stop none before
Before you post or submit your work REREAD IT for sense!
Close your parentheses please! It doesn't matter if they're (), , {}, or [] close them, close them, close them!
Denie1943 chapter 14 . 3/11
Good story...a sequel would be great! Thanks for sharing. Stay well!
Beth1112 chapter 14 . 2/24
I really enjoyed your story.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/19
Thank you for sharing this tale with us. I enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/18
It was nice of Hermione to tell Ron that he'd need his studies for after his Quidditch career, rather than point out that most people who want a career in professional sports, do not get one.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/7
More please
James Potter chapter 14 . 1/5
Sequel pls
Also its actually my name
Kai chapter 12 . 12/6/2023
The question is not "Why did Dumbledore GET those letters?", but "Why did Dumbledore OPEN those letters?" In my country it's a crime, unless he's their (as in: Hermione's as well) guardian, or has an official warrant and is law enforcement officer. I believe it's similar in Britain.
Kai chapter 10 . 12/6/2023
"Would you like to stain his soul with such deeds?" - "No, headmaster, but you do. Quirrell didn't die of a heart attack after all, and it was you who arranged that encounter."

"I'll see what I can do to improve security." Well that's not a promise to introduce those improvements he sees. It would just be another piece of knowledge he'd sit on without ever doing anything about it. Like everything else - unless his own position is threatened, of course.
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