As per usual Kreature hasn't done his job in keeping up the Black's home. The old Elf is useless for anything and everything except supporting the phony Dark Lord. He just doesn't seem to realize that Good Ole Fumblemort is at least as much of a Dark Lord as Vulturewurst is. He has his plan for the magical world along with Harry and nobody's gonna change his mind. It wouldn't surprise me if he already had a marriage contract all written up for whom Harry will marry. And you can bet whatever you want that it isn't Hermione Granger. Nope! Not happening! She's a muggleborn like Lily and the Potter family line MUST return to being strictly Pureblood marriages. Somebody give that poor old deluded fraudster a fifty caliber cure for all his delusions! They'll be doing the magical world a huge favor!

It's a damn good thing Hermione didn't mention phone calls to Fumblemort! He'd have had some excuse for why she couldn't use that either. I think it's well past time Harry and Hermione said a sad goodbye to Hogwash and found a school that actually teaches to a much higher standard. I suspect that Hogwash teaches to an extremely low standard. After all, all that inbreeding can't have been good for their magic. They even have a warning from the Gaunts. They married only into their own family for so many generations they lost their magic. Then there are all the squibs born to them to consider. That should be a major red flag type warning that something is very, very wrong in their families. But nope! They blame it on the muggleborns or the muggles stealing it instead. Anything to kick that can further down the road and make it someone else's problem.

Great story concept and content character development was done well hope you continue

And now he went from “ill be with you forever” to “if it doesn’t work out I can date Ginny”.

Yea, lol…

Wow, n a few weeks he went from “girls might be interesting” to “I want you, let’s be together forever”?

Right.

I’m not averse to H/Hr stories, but why are they always so forced, like R/Hr (incredibly unlikely, but then jkr was a shit writer)?

I Love It!
Beautiful teenage romance .
I do prefer an HEA but this ending was wonderful.
As usual there are several syntax problems for me, but not big enough to ruin the story.
Thanks for writing.

Good story

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Did the stupid kids even remember protection? lol

Me encanta la historia

Decent story with somewhat reasonable, laisse-faire authoritarian figures.
the RonW character was obviously 'undeveloped', while others showed some growth.
Also appreciate the maturity of Sirius, and fulfilling his guardianship.

A sequel portraying the fifth school year without Umbridge (arrested), the souljar search, and Harry without a volde-headache would be interesting AU.

bonne fic!

This story had good bones, but seemed quite rushed. I didn't feel like I got to enjoy their relationship development at all. As soon as the story started, then it ended. I guess I'll go search for a hopeful sequel!

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Good story...a sequel would be great! Thanks for sharing. Stay well!