Reviews for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero Returns |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This meeting between Lupin and Tonks puts into perspective how… weird their cannon relationship was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story does have some nice character interactions, I'm just hoping for some action, there has been like zero so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a lackluster way of dealing with Malfoy, extremely unsatisfying |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's starting to get on my nerves how you never want the chatacters to retaliate against Malfoy, I'm 2/3rds in and all they've done is avoid avoid avoid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this story just tries to avoid confrontation as much as possible huh? Just people coming out of nowhere to interrupt and everything. Aggravating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Andromeda really had so many options she could have chosen before telling Dumbledore where the house was ._. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do Sirius not know Harry has ahorcruxes in hs head? After all a check up should reveal it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me encanta tu forma de escribir. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lo que le paso a Blaise es similar a lo que le pasó a Harry? |
![]() ![]() ![]() all looking good so far lets continue this journey |
![]() ![]() ![]() An absolute perfect chapter, I suggest that everyone reads this brilliant fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The banter in this fanfic is 10/10! Most writers can‘t write a proper dialogue without it being boring, cringe or dramatic. It just flows |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can already tell that this is a banger fanfic! My favorite Haphne story (at least these chapters) I‘ve never commented before but this is just SO well written and thought out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a short guy and i can definitively say not many women are as tall as i am or all that close really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't understand why people do the POV title thing, but you are quite good at making it obvious who's perspective we are reading which makes it doubly unnecessary just my 2 pence |