Reviews for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero's Return
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30
Yeah, not my cup of tea gl going foward tho.
EvelynnSylph chapter 8 . 8/30
That was hilarious! Really funny
Jamie Holmes2 chapter 1 . 8/20
Very good chapter
Jamie Holmes2 chapter 1 . 8/20
Bery good
NhaTrang chapter 2 . 8/13
"Neither the ministry nor MACUSA could track it." If Harry grew up in Massachusetts, what would he much care about what the Ministry could do or not? (Quite aside from why is he using British-make brooms?)

Never mind ... eeeesh, author's notes at the END, perhaps?
fhl1234 chapter 1 . 8/6
Excellent first chapter. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
rubyred1120 chapter 36 . 7/28
Love the story so far! I just finished book 1. Also to answer your question, switching to AO3 would be great!
DylanHh chapter 34 . 5/23
I was hoping harry was going to eventually be on the titan wizard level but clearly your just making a little above average
DaPhoneixQueen chapter 1 . 5/20
cringe when stories start off with a child already sexualized. hard pass
Cipher301 chapter 20 . 5/18
Susan stfu you’re twisting the knife…
DylanHh chapter 25 . 5/17
Cedric really was not that good of a player only reason he ever won was because harry got attacked still think harry was one of the greatest seekers ever and could have surpassed most of the pros if moldyshorts did not return
DylanHh chapter 15 . 5/16
This harry is a bloody idiot
DylanHh chapter 7 . 5/16
Wish you didint have to make him sound so weak in comparsion to lord greengrass
Cipher301 chapter 15 . 5/14
Cedric is a g
Cipher301 chapter 6 . 5/13
Alr W. Big bro Harry time
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