This meeting between Lupin and Tonks puts into perspective how… weird their cannon relationship was.

the story does have some nice character interactions, I'm just hoping for some action, there has been like zero so far

what a lackluster way of dealing with Malfoy, extremely unsatisfying

It's starting to get on my nerves how you never want the chatacters to retaliate against Malfoy, I'm 2/3rds in and all they've done is avoid avoid avoid

Man, this story just tries to avoid confrontation as much as possible huh? Just people coming out of nowhere to interrupt and everything. Aggravating.

Andromeda really had so many options she could have chosen before telling Dumbledore where the house was ._.

Why do Sirius not know Harry has ahorcruxes in hs head? After all a check up should reveal it?

Me encanta tu forma de escribir.

Lo que le paso a Blaise es similar a lo que le pasó a Harry?

all looking good so far lets continue this journey

An absolute perfect chapter, I suggest that everyone reads this brilliant fanfic!

The banter in this fanfic is 10/10! Most writers can‘t write a proper dialogue without it being boring, cringe or dramatic. It just flows

I can already tell that this is a banger fanfic! My favorite Haphne story (at least these chapters) I‘ve never commented before but this is just SO well written and thought out!

I'm a short guy and i can definitively say not many women are as tall as i am or all that close really.

I don't understand why people do the POV title thing, but you are quite good at making it obvious who's perspective we are reading which makes it doubly unnecessary just my 2 pence