Reviews for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero Returns
Ishaan Kharia chapter 1 . 4/3
This meeting between Lupin and Tonks puts into perspective how… weird their cannon relationship was.
AndySerri chapter 25 . 3/16
the story does have some nice character interactions, I'm just hoping for some action, there has been like zero so far
AndySerri chapter 24 . 3/16
what a lackluster way of dealing with Malfoy, extremely unsatisfying
AndySerri chapter 23 . 3/16
It's starting to get on my nerves how you never want the chatacters to retaliate against Malfoy, I'm 2/3rds in and all they've done is avoid avoid avoid
AndySerri chapter 15 . 3/16
Man, this story just tries to avoid confrontation as much as possible huh? Just people coming out of nowhere to interrupt and everything. Aggravating.
AndySerri chapter 3 . 3/16
Andromeda really had so many options she could have chosen before telling Dumbledore where the house was ._.
teaman1 chapter 4 . 2/5
Why do Sirius not know Harry has ahorcruxes in hs head? After all a check up should reveal it?
Tsuruga Lia1412 chapter 34 . 2/3
Me encanta tu forma de escribir.
Tsuruga Lia1412 chapter 17 . 2/2
Lo que le paso a Blaise es similar a lo que le pasó a Harry?
Morheart chapter 1 . 1/10
all looking good so far lets continue this journey
Ni8ki chapter 9 . 12/23/2024
An absolute perfect chapter, I suggest that everyone reads this brilliant fanfic!
Ni8ki chapter 6 . 12/23/2024
The banter in this fanfic is 10/10! Most writers can‘t write a proper dialogue without it being boring, cringe or dramatic. It just flows
Ni8ki chapter 4 . 12/23/2024
I can already tell that this is a banger fanfic! My favorite Haphne story (at least these chapters) I‘ve never commented before but this is just SO well written and thought out!
MRGwrites chapter 14 . 11/17/2024
I'm a short guy and i can definitively say not many women are as tall as i am or all that close really.
MRGwrites chapter 9 . 11/17/2024
I don't understand why people do the POV title thing, but you are quite good at making it obvious who's perspective we are reading which makes it doubly unnecessary just my 2 pence
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