Reviews for Zuma
dreamiedreamer chapter 16 . 1h
OMG, what a chapter! Alice ran away from home, Rosalie was the cover girl of a lad's mag and on top of all that Bella was going on a grown up date with Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter.
mysticfighter111 chapter 16 . 3h
Hope the discovery of Rosalie's latest endesvours won't spoil the big night for Bella and Edward.
krisbianforlyfe chapter 16 . 4h
the Rosalie plot thickens and AH i’d hate to be the one to break Renee’s heart when she finds out about her babygirlexcited for some real date goodness at the premiere next chapter!
tpea1288 chapter 16 . 4h
Ah! Charlie has been on to Edward! Making out in the car! I know that in the 70's, people went to drive in movies aka passion pits!

Charlie & Renee seem so happy together; they deserve that whatever their kids problems. But I think Bella will need to tell them what about Rosalie. She's an adult; they can't fix it but it could help if they knew what she's dealing with. And they are bound to find out-kinder from Bella.

Bella's reaction to Alice was spot on; disappointment she didn't contact them but confident she would. Understanding Alice. This is hard for them but not impossible. Jasper can get another job. They might be able to move near his family & obtain help. Alice can get her GED and being the 70's college is cheap.

Edward and Bella are magic together.
Taylor9901 chapter 16 . 4h
I felt the heat in the car. Wow is definitely what I felt.
fuz chapter 16 . 5h
Lovely!
Thank you!
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 16 . 7h
Eek! I can't wait for the rest of the date! Then we can deal with Alice and Rosalie! Lol love the little PB snippets as well. Can't wait till the next chapter!
majose chapter 16 . 7h
I loved Bella’s reaction to Alice leaving because it was so honest. And Angela was the perfect counterweight. It is a blessing to have good friends. I am worried about Alice, but mainly about Rosalie. It is like watching a car crash coming and not being able to do anything to stop it.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 16 . 8h
OMG, the memories this chapter brought me. Charlie’s leisure suit, Bella’s Andy Gibb poster! Even the El Camino! I literally ROFLOA at “ My eyes literally break through the mascara web, jump out of my head and roll across the floor.” Since I was sitting in a cafe eating breakfast, it was just as funny for the other customers, I’m sure! The nostalgia you bring with this fic really is great. It brings to mind all the fun I had as a teen, as well as all the feelings that comes with liking your siblings friends. In my case, it was Steve Fox, on of my brothers best friends. He was the cutest guy I knew at that time. Sadly, there was never an Edward moment with him. And sadder is the fact that he passed away last year. I love this fic PB. Can’t wait to see you in Chicago this weekend!
gmd028 chapter 16 . 8h
Great update!
Guest chapter 16 . 8h
Loooove all the details that are in this story. Every time I read something iconic or that popular I laugh because I’ve forgotten things and to be reminded of them, brings a smile to my face. Thank you for that.
Midnight Cougar chapter 16 . 10h
That was some kiss! Wow, is right. Lol And Rosalie... ugh, she is in a messy situation, it would seem—nice change to have Emmett as the bad guy. X
archy12 chapter 16 . 11h
Wow, Alice left with Jasper? I hadn't thought he would step up and get married.
Her house and her mother... yes, it's obvious why she ran away.
Rosalie is still living at home, right? What will Renee say when she sees those pictures?
Haha, Bella was worried about Charlie, and he already knew! :)
Azlady2003 chapter 16 . 14h
Wow...so Emmett either made her do porn or rose did and Emmett's just supporting her dreams. Edward finally kissed her like he wants Bella yes!
traceybuie chapter 16 . 15h
It seems Charlie, Renee nor Edward know about Rose's new job adventure. hmm... Bella needs to be distracted from that for a while, but I'm feeling all ominous about the magazine being in her purse though.
Alice escaped her judgmental bossy parents at least. Hopefully she'll notify her friends about what's going on with her soon.
The first really good kiss was swooney. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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