Reviews for Zuma |
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Heewonjay chapter 26 . 8/4/2024 I’m super late to this but wow wow wow. I loved it so much. You described everything so perfectly I felt like I was there living it although I was born about 20 years later on the opposite coast lol Bella and Edward were so cute and sweet and funny. Scratch that. Bella legit stole the show with her comedy every time. Ugh, I wish I knew someone that funny in real life lol Edward is the epitome of the saying “if he wanted to, he would.” Because those birthday gifts? The birthday locations? A. He wins best boyfriend. No competition. I love them both so much I’m devastated I reached the end and now I have to let them go. I loved their family dynamic. Like how Renee was content to be her parent but not parent her and how Charlie would just accept the wild shit she would say with a grin. I love how supportive and fun they were. I even loved Bella’s love/hate relationship with Rose. It was so so so cute when they would get along. I’m super sad about Rose and wished she had a happier ending but thats life I guess. I’m happy her friendship with Angela survived at least. Their friendship was really sweet and that would’ve had me sobbing if they didnt make it. The line a few chapters ago where Bella predicted that was the last time they would see Alice was truly saddening. I was hoping they would meet up again. Thank you for giving us a peek at what Alice was up to all these years later. Thank you for writing this amazing and fun story! You made living in the 70’s sound so dope |
Oaklandblackouts chapter 26 . 1/11/2024 i love this story so much. hope you come back and write something else for us soon! |
Saltypoetry chapter 1 . 1/11/2024 What a great story! Bella is so awesomefunny. I found myself smiling a lot while reading this. I may nearly spit out some coffee too. |
Guest chapter 26 . 11/25/2023 I’ve come back to this story again. So well done. |
Abaire chapter 26 . 7/3/2023 You are one of my favorite authors here in FanFic world, after years of reading these sorties. You did such a lovely job bringing the imagery to life, I suooose a sort of cinematographer with words if you will. I feel very conflicted over the Rosalie story, but I appreciate that you did something no one else has. You created a character who makes me feel sympathy and pity, and someone to inspire prayer for millions of girls who romanticize a world that I know is not fun or glamorous. This was also a different Edward for you and I really appreciated his character too. Thank you for writing this. Now what the heck is a peanut blossom cookie? Off to Google. |
alli62 chapter 26 . 4/2/2023 I just reread this awesome story again straight through. I loved it even more the second time (if that’s possible). A kickass Bella! What a storyteller you are….. the best. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
Colleen Alize chapter 26 . 1/25/2023 I absolutely LOVED this fic. Thqbk youbfor posting |
TMTF chapter 26 . 1/13/2023 I think this is my third time reading this story over the last couple of years, and I still love it just as much as the first time. Thanks for writing such a wonderfully funny, sweet story and for paying sex work so much respect. I love reading the fun facts at the end, and I always know this is a story I can come back to and thoroughly enjoy. Cheers! |
debb lavoie chapter 26 . 12/10/2022 Love the road head! An excellent story told in a great way. 1978 sure was a great music year. |
debb lavoie chapter 21 . 12/10/2022 Oh oh, she's back. |
debb lavoie chapter 20 . 12/10/2022 Love that smell, used to wear it as well. Sad when friendship ends. |
debb lavoie chapter 16 . 12/10/2022 Love reading your fun facts. Your parents sound nice. |
debb lavoie chapter 13 . 12/10/2022 Omg! Loving these songs. |
debb lavoie chapter 12 . 12/9/2022 Great chapter! |
debb lavoie chapter 10 . 12/9/2022 Oh my goodness, edward really like Bella. |