|Reviews for Zuma|
| The Official Xoxo chapter 26 . 10/17
This was so heartwarming and original. I am honestly in tears and am just grateful that this story was able to be finished. I do hate that Alice was a rather selfish friend who just kinda has no redeeming qualities, but that's lolfe and you did a great job of reflecting that.
| KDMCAM chapter 26 . 10/10
This is such a fantastic story! So many great memories! What they did on the surfboard is probably every girls surfer boy dream! I loved all her bday gifts! What i think that made this so good is that not everyones story was a perfect happy ending. That’s life!
| cullensrule chapter 26 . 9/1
I was worried about Rosalie entering the pork chop industry right before the AIDs epidemic began. I knew she had past as soon as the chapter started. It was great that she was successful and did it on her terms. I loved the Charlie got to get his vengeance on Emmett.
Your story was a wonderful trip down memory lane for me. I was a teenager n the late seventies early eighties. You are right Valley Girl is a great movie. Thank you so much.
| cullensrule chapter 23 . 9/1
Couldn't she get the same hey from legitimate modeling or go to acting school?
| cullensrule chapter 22 . 9/1
At least Rosalie showed up for Bella's birthday. She is still wants to be a part of the family.
| cullensrule chapter 16 . 8/31
I love all the seventies references. They bring back good memories.
| Secretrevenge chapter 12 . 8/24
Sarsaparilla. Best root beer. We used to sell it in our country store.
| idiosyncrasy at its finest chapter 1 . 8/23
I’m on chapter 15 or so right now, and I just want to say that I’m in love. The writing style is so fresh and immersive. It’s unique, too. Like when you said ‘well doy’, in any other fic that would’ve caused me to cringe, but it felt so... her. Bella is pretty ooc in this fic but reading it makes me feel like I’m there. I’m nostalgic for a place I’ve never been. And now I really want to go. I love the references to all these shows and movies even though I’ve never seen them. The writing is amazing and the story is so full of life. I love it so much
| cullensrule chapter 13 . 8/9
I read the same book for pretty much the same reason.
| cullensrule chapter 10 . 8/8
I was briefly related to Robby Benson for seven years. His aunt was married to my uncle. It was during this period of time. Unfortunately I never met him. He was busy in Hollywood.
| cullensrule chapter 6 . 8/7
My Aunt was my gym teacher in elementary school. I would see other teachers at her home. Kids would freak out when she showed up at my birthday parties.
| dazzledforeverbyEdward chapter 26 . 8/1
Loved this story, hated the epilogue. It’s a ridiculous and stupid ending to an otherwise sweet coming of age fic. AIDS isn’t funny. Killing yourself by porno sex and probably doing drugs isn’t funny either. I get what you were trying to do but it was spectacular fail and ruined the entire fic for me. It’s not just irreverent and therefore makes it ok because it’s a terrible situation. No. The stupid stories of pride and accolades are just nonsensical. This girl died because of her horrid choices. Died because she had probably unprotected, infected sex with random guys for people to still make money off of. It’s not funny. It’s not cute. It’s not badass. It’s sad and should be a how to of what not to do. What not to accept. What not to congratulate. She wasn’t a badass who made porn on her own terms. She is a dead junkie who died of aids because her parents cared more about being cool and not alienating her instead of giving her tough love that may have made her re-examine her stupid and ultimately deadly choices.
Seriously, this was cringeworthy and made me hate every one of these characters except maybe for Carlisle. And none worse than Bella, Edward, Renee and Charlie. With family like these four, no wonder Rosalie never stood a chance. No one would be laughing and celebrating a career and lifestyle that caused this poor girl’s death. Disgusting.
| Do'B chapter 26 . 7/28
Wow...loved reDing your story. I kept overlooking this, putting it off and putting it off until now.
So reminiscent Of years gone by, I loved how you portrayed Rose character-very visual classy and eloquent.
| aka AddictedToFic chapter 26 . 7/10
This hit me so hard in the feels! Stories of teen summer romances always make me so emotional!
| Ashlie Christine chapter 26 . 6/3
Cute! Well done!