Reviews for Phoenix Insurgent
Reader chapter 10 . 4/23/2020
This is so good, please update!
editing error chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
"Gellert sighed. "Fine. Let's go find this egotistical brat's Horcrux."

This part makes no sense, just a few paragraphs above you have Dumbledore refuse, and insist on destroying the horcrux alone.
EvilMagician chapter 3 . 3/31/2020
I can tell this is going to be great. You tell some excellent stories. Hopefully you don't fall back into the stuttering mess that is my only problem with the Downward Spiral Saga lol
DarkSorcerer888 chapter 10 . 3/24/2020
Gellert should very well be looking for other ways to get rid of the soul shard than simply killing Harry. He is a political revolutionary. He should know well the power of symbols. If Dumbledore and Grindelwald dispose of Tom, it will be seen as nothing more than one dark Lord killing another. If the boy-who-lived destroys Tom, it will be seen as a hero destroying the enemy.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/22/2020
This is fucking awesome
NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 3/19/2020
This story would of been amazing if Harry was not canon what if he was Scary Smart Harry who played the fool the moment he saw Albus finally grow balls he reveals himself
ThelittleKing chapter 10 . 3/15/2020
Great Update, really like the plot.
b.angaragerdene chapter 10 . 3/14/2020
Things are getting interesting. Wow.
nanosaurous chapter 10 . 3/14/2020
Love it! Looking forward to the next update:)
KingPlotBunny chapter 10 . 3/14/2020
damn I almost forgot about this story I got to say this Grindelwald has far less instability than your downward spiral version then again this one doesn't have to carry the war himself with the Elder wand whispering to him I do hope Harry gets to survive and that Grindelwald can take control of Voldemorts Inferi
ghaisdlkfns chapter 10 . 3/14/2020
Very nice. I really like what you're doing with this. It has a lot of potential for very interesting politics and very very awesome fight scenes.

Considering your previous works and the lessons you learned from them I think this could be a masterpiece (surpassing BIRR).

A few things to note: make sure you really nail the conflict inside Albus. It needs to come across as realistic and whatever way you take it in needs to come across as effective (especially considering how you are characterising him with Gellert).

For the political things keeping every characters motives in mind is key to effectively depict what happens. What do they each want? How far are they willing to go to get that? How can there views be changed?

If you can get those nailed this story will be exceptional. Looking forward to the next one.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/14/2020
Fuck yes.

Rarely been more happy about an update.

I am so fucking ready to see Gellert and Albus in battle together!

Also. He has the wand. He has the stone. And Harry has the cloak. Master of Death Dumbledore is surely only a matter of time. It’s just a question of when he succumbs to temptation. And I can’t fucking wait.
TheOnlyKing chapter 10 . 3/14/2020
Hehehe good chapter, I am eagerly waiting for the complete corruption of Dumbledore. It'll be so awesome, I've never seen a fic like this.
morbidnicorobin chapter 1 . 3/1/2020
Absolutely fantastic!
Allisonlt chapter 9 . 2/7/2020
This is awwwwsome and pleeeeaaase update!
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