Reviews for The Trouble With Horses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I enjoyed reading it. One thing sort of annoyed me. I would have liked Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner to have faced some consequences. I have no idea about the regency conventions, but I hope it was really bad style to send ones nieces off with a practical stranger they did not want to be in company with. Sending two gentle women out in London with an unknown and only a maid as chaperone sound like really poor style to me. Plot wise it would have been interesting because those two are always good people in JAFF. Otherwise it was a great story. Thanks for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a plot twist. Looking forward to reading the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() smaller snd younger snakes are more dangerous |
![]() ![]() ![]() With a sister like Kitty, Elizabeth doesn’t need enemies. I’m only surprised Elizabeth didn’t slap her one. |
![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh yes a sequel would be lovely! |
![]() ![]() Honestly, this is completely ridiculous. I don’t even recognise the characters, only their names. What’s the point in calling it P&P fanfic if the only thing similar are the names? You might as well just changed the names and published it as original. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do love it when a nasty Caroline gets an almighty set down. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is an old story but I do wish, I really, really do wish authors would stop making Mrs Bennet into such a fool. It gets so tedious. Now that said I’m looking forward to the rest of the book. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable story! I loved the expanded role given to Mary, as well as her own happy ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() me ha encantado. la disfrute muchísimo |
![]() ![]() ![]() The characters being trapped in outrageous comedic circumstances and misunderstandings make this story delightful. I think it would be nice to flesh out the story between chapters 8 and 9. I think there is much you can do between the engagement and wedding as Fate throws them more curveballs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy coincidence I found your stories. I really enjoy the relationship between lizzy and Mary. I also like how you paired Mary with Col Fitzwilliam. Do you have any stories about them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much |
![]() ![]() Loved this story. Read it on Kindle a few years ago and when I saw it on this site, I decided to read it again. I was once again deleted. Thank you. |