Reviews for The Trouble With Horses
HPforever2018-3 chapter 9 . 5/1/2024
Great story. I enjoyed reading it.

One thing sort of annoyed me. I would have liked Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner to have faced some consequences. I have no idea about the regency conventions, but I hope it was really bad style to send ones nieces off with a practical stranger they did not want to be in company with. Sending two gentle women out in London with an unknown and only a maid as chaperone sound like really poor style to me. Plot wise it would have been interesting because those two are always good people in JAFF.

Otherwise it was a great story. Thanks for posting.
HPforever2018-3 chapter 6 . 5/1/2024
What a plot twist. Looking forward to reading the rest.
microingcerealisnorm chapter 1 . 2/23/2024
smaller snd younger snakes are more dangerous
Peperuda chapter 3 . 2/9/2024
With a sister like Kitty, Elizabeth doesn’t need enemies. I’m only surprised Elizabeth didn’t slap her one.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/1/2024
Cute
coecoe11 chapter 9 . 7/30/2023
oh yes a sequel would be lovely!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2023
Honestly, this is completely ridiculous. I don’t even recognise the characters, only their names.

What’s the point in calling it P&P fanfic if the only thing similar are the names? You might as well just changed the names and published it as original.
Peperuda chapter 2 . 5/18/2023
I do love it when a nasty Caroline gets an almighty set down. Well done.
Peperuda chapter 1 . 5/18/2023
I know this is an old story but I do wish, I really, really do wish authors would stop making Mrs Bennet into such a fool. It gets so tedious.
Now that said I’m looking forward to the rest of the book.
dpennell007 chapter 9 . 4/12/2023
Adorable story! I loved the expanded role given to Mary, as well as her own happy ending.
pelusa778 chapter 9 . 4/3/2023
me ha encantado. la disfrute muchísimo
eopandabear chapter 8 . 2/28/2023
The characters being trapped in outrageous comedic circumstances and misunderstandings make this story delightful. I think it would be nice to flesh out the story between chapters 8 and 9. I think there is much you can do between the engagement and wedding as Fate throws them more curveballs.
Georgesjungle2 chapter 9 . 2/18/2023
Happy coincidence I found your stories. I really enjoy the relationship between lizzy and Mary.

I also like how you paired Mary with Col Fitzwilliam. Do you have any stories about them?
liefje27 chapter 9 . 1/25/2023
I love this story so much
margeanongmail chapter 9 . 10/19/2022
Loved this story. Read it on Kindle a few years ago and when I saw it on this site, I decided to read it again. I was once again deleted.
Thank you.
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