Reviews for Pokémon: Storm
Spanner96 chapter 6 . 8/27
Lost me here. You’ve made a big thing about Mason worrying over his impact on canon, but then you proceed to make changes that have nothing to do with what Mason has done. Gary is only slightly better than Ash by the Pokémon League, with Ash simply taking longer to reach that level of competence… your version of Gary is hyper competent where he’s not in canon, and it’s for no other reason than you wanting Mason to struggle.

Mason worrying about influencing canon loses any and all dramatic value the second you start making forced changes to canon.
lukejmontier1 chapter 23 . 8/25
Kylo Ren chapter 6 . 8/14
Pour quand la mise à jour et est ce qu'il va avoir une romance Mason X Misty
Blue-Happens chapter 11 . 8/6
I really like this fic, but you have a weird habit of repeating the same information 2-3 times slightly differently, like a barely changed sentence
Storylover213 chapter 23 . 8/2
So question as I really do love this fic but I have to ask is it discontinued or on Hiatus?
Vortz chapter 23 . 7/30
Yep, this story is still just as good.
Thank you for the read!
- Vortz
KaterinaWhite chapter 23 . 7/25
Please update! I need to read more!
tyrickonelson5 chapter 9 . 7/21
Gliychra chapter 23 . 7/8
Is his name Juan, Jaun, or John
Gliychra chapter 4 . 7/7
If I didn't know why Mason was like this I would be shopping him and Ash
phuntsok8733 chapter 23 . 7/5
Are you gonna update this?
20webmaster02 chapter 23 . 6/9
where's the next chapter
Jasper Johnson chapter 11 . 6/8
I am a ginger and my name is also Jasper, this is just to weird.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
Oak just finding out Pokémon came from eggs makes no sense when they have places that help hatch eggs.
jaychristiansmith23 chapter 23 . 4/21
I hope you continue
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