Reviews for Pokémon: Storm
ymrgf chapter 12 . 11/3
Eh dropped this. Clearly following canon with mc with Ash. Waste of time.
gryphan.master900 chapter 1 . 9/10
This is painfully stupid, gen 2 was embarrassing, after living with pokemon for thousands of years of freaking course people know they lay eggs, I'm out, not even finishing the chapter.
DanMachiSaiyan chapter 1 . 8/17
So they have pokedex but a pokemon professor doesnt know if pokemon have eggs? wtf. And this oak seems like he never had a dragonite even tho he has one with his interaction with dratini. I hope this is some Alternate Universe (AU) type story cause this is just so wrong and if it is an AU story then please label it. So far this universe makes no sense.
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 24 . 8/12
Meh, the OC is too much of a try-hard, and the sticking to canon is getting old
Soraslove chapter 23 . 7/24
Rip mega stone.
Soraslove chapter 17 . 7/24
Mason seems to be one of those type of people who doesn't know when to walk away. I find that more annoying than ash's behavior in the canon and in this story.

If mason doesn't like how ash behaves he should have left the group to do his own thing, rather than be around ash who doesn't care to have the same serious attitude that our MC has with training. Why does he have to berate ash to become his pokemon trainer clone, even if it's something that will be good for him? Let ash develop in his own way, stop acting like a control freak.
Soraslove chapter 10 . 7/24
I think mason should go off on his own, ash and the rest are holding him back; training wise anyways.
Grim chapter 24 . 7/21
Skipped ahead because I got bored and yep still following along with canon events.
Grim chapter 12 . 7/21
This started off good, but now the MC just follows the mc around like a puppy and following canon, I'm so bored.
Ranmaleopard chapter 24 . 7/8
this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. please continue
Iyawolfwhite chapter 24 . 6/1
️️️
Guest chapter 24 . 5/17
You went from exciting and amazing to rubbish rather quickly.
Devaamshu Boro chapter 1 . 4/21
Nice start
coreymmorgan1996 chapter 15 . 4/20
i dont understand how the main character knows how fuking annoying team rocket is and not get them to a jenny like come on its so annoying to have jesse and jamies in this and not get the main character to deal with them
matiasleissoder97 chapter 16 . 4/2
Dude the Ash is a trash trainer, my MC can do no wrong it's getting really old... Every chapter is Mason Just ranting about Ash...
1,333 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »