This is a good read hope you make another update on this

retard

It took me a few days to binge through the entire fic, and boy, i enjoyed it, sad that i finally catched up, and rip the mega

ash is btw a trash trainer, he got all 3 starters and only one fully evolved and didnt even listen to him, the other 2 didnt even evolve

im ashamed that he has the same name as me

really waiting for mistyromance hehe

Rooting for mcxmisty here

Hope its mcxmisty, also i hope he catches the crystal onix

Personally i would go for amnesia

And now I leave, mason got a bad case of extreme plot idiocy I can’t see him getting on that boat let alone betting a member of his team and his starter at that….

I have a good idea for a new book You can do gears of war

Love where the story is going. Looking forward to try next chapter thank you for writing.

This is an excellent read I hope you keep making more chapters

My 1st review and I have to say, it's a very exciting story so far.
The way he lost the megastone was foolish though. Unneeded tbh
I am gonna guess the egg is an absol? Or are u gonna make him lose the egg too?

"he didn't really get much thrill out of watching a catch like that. 'Guess that's what happens when you already know what's going to happen in advance."

You admit this in the story but still wrote a copy/paste of the anime? I read up till chapter 11 where it's still nothing but canon, just following the group around like an attention starved puppy. Not sure why you wrote this knowing yourself that it's boring, but to each there own.

And what's with him smirking every other sentence it's bloody weird.