Reviews for Pokémon: Storm
myafroatemydog chapter 15 . 2/13
Damn good chap
MaxTheMagnificent24 chapter 24 . 2/9
Man things are getting really interesting. I hope you updated the next chapter of this story soon dude
0DINS0N chapter 13 . 2/6
Fucking disappointing chapter. Mason did more for charmader then Ash who tried to forcefully capture him This story is a rehash of Canon with barely nothing changing. Too irksome to counter reading tbh.
0DINS0N chapter 12 . 2/6
Meh kind disappointed he won't catch any pokemon before Ash tbh.
0DINS0N chapter 8 . 2/6
Annoying how he's so bothered about Ash tbh.
0DINS0N chapter 4 . 2/6
Eh not a fan of him not wanting to disrupt canon. Him being there and the age changes prove this isn't Canon. He needs to live his life and strengthen himself as much as possible knowing the threats out there. Him not wanting to take charmander knowing it's potential is plain stupid and naive of him.
0DINS0N chapter 3 . 2/6
Really hope mc gets some of the pokemom Ash would of gotten. Charmander & Squirtel to name a few.
RadioactiveGods chapter 1 . 1/28
Why does every single SI on the planet immediately get steel-toe boots lmao its not the win that you think it is. Sturdy hiking boots, absolutly. But steel toes are just going to make the shoe unnecessarily heavy and more cumbersome to wear for long stretches, as well as more uncomfortable, not to mention they're useless 99% of the time. I've worked construction most of my life, and you couldn't pay me to wear steel toe boots. In my experience, standard boots without any toe reinforcement are rigid enough to stop any of the usual things that would ever fall on your toes from hurting much, with the added benefit that if anything too heavy for the steel toe falls, you've only got a broken foot, rather than the metal being shoved in and shearing your toes off. And I'm not talking out of my ass here, I literally know a guy that happened to. But even if your gonna be a stickler for OSHA rules, a nice composit toe satisfies all of their requirements while also being lighter and more comfortable, with the added benefit that too much weight on them will just crack it, and again lead to a broken foot, instead of warping it in and cutting your foot in half. In summary: fuck steel toe boots
M1stymix chapter 24 . 1/26
pokemon world tbh should regularly face world ending threats tbh because of how powerful pokemons are and so many legends so mc shouldn't really be worried about his action affect ash's role in world ending threats Government has champions and elite 4 to deal with those and even Legendary pokemon help from time to time. Plus I really think Mc needs to find a psychic type who can teleport would've helped a lot escaping and even a Chansey to help heal his pokemon and even use gravity to train them
M1stymix chapter 16 . 1/26
cause the guy is a fcking teenager? What is with this bashing you are doing so much why does mc care so much if cares so much about the pokemon then go fcking join a group that stop people who don't take being a trainer seriously It's getting so annoying the mc is not Ash's best friend, sibling or is even close they are just friends. Can't he handle that teenagers are most of the times idiots who don't take things seriously? And why does he have to compare himself to Ash when they are just getting started and even in the anime Ash didn't win indigo league besides all mc's hard work he could prove it in the league matches. And going so far as punching the guy twice already? wtf makes no sense should he punch all the teenager cause most likely they would act the same it's really stupid
M1stymix chapter 12 . 1/26
you know why not just let their flying types look for the trail or heck use a compass for right direction is travelling 101
M1stymix chapter 10 . 1/26
some tip you should have added how it was training in the beginning and all the struggle cause thru out the conversation it sounds like all Aj had was success from the start there was no struggle to finding the right nutrient or right exercise for his pokemon or even nifty discoveries he found along the way. Also oof steel toed boots is a big no no you'll get your toes cut off instead of getting protected by it heavily padded boots is much better
M1stymix chapter 9 . 1/26
okay how did not the mc notice Misty calls herself in 3rd person lol hahaha. Also it was kinda expected she would us gyrados since it was stated earlier that she is the favorite of the father who owned a gyrados. Also PLOTHOLE fresh water can't conduct electricity so gyarados shouldn't be hurt by the electric current
Gilgamesh50 chapter 15 . 1/21
Whats with the ash bashing or demeaning? Come in i feel like it happens every other chapter even tho i am rooting for the mc it is kinda annoying
Bahiagmc chapter 3 . 1/10
Type advantages are a real strategy in pokemon battling and ignoring it simply to play fair is the epitome of stupidity
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