Why would he join ash?

This story has alot of issues, but tolerable... this chapter though finally took things in an unreadable direction though.

Why say Feebas ruined it. It evolves into Milotic. Does the writer of this story not know something so important? It makes the protagonist look like a wannabe know it all wo is not even aware of simple things despite being from our world.

MC has too much of a hardon for Ash, he's living his life and journey based off the guy when he should just be another random to him, one he obviously doesn't even like so he should avoid him altogether, instead he's focused so much on a percieved 'canon' that it's ruling his life. Heck, he's spending more time trying to raise Ash than his parents have.

Raticate* Not Raticade.

honest criticism-The story feels bland so far he started out with a dratini which is fine but he also got scyther and 2 other pokemon within 4 chapters which feels a bit too cheap for me. the characters are one dimensional the mc is the cool know it all, misty the mc's cheerleader and ash the punching bag. the main character smirks a lot which makes him feel like an ass he continues to act superior to ash who is still a 15 year old kid when he is a reincarnated adult this to me reads as a person who has an inferiority complex and wants to put other people down so he can feel better about himself. maybe the story gets better as you go through it but there is no hook to the story there is nothing that makes me want to continue reading it.

I hope this doesn't come off as condescending

Awesome can't wait for more :)

Prrtty good chap

cant wait for more

This is a good chapter so far.

Well atleast he didn’t lose all his shit, but he still lost his shit

Did he lose his backpack or is he carrying all his crap with him at all times?

So excited to see a new chapter for this story! Yeah Mason has definitely had a few shocks in the last couple of days, good to see he's using them to fuel his resolve! Interesting to hear more of the world-building you're doing, looking forward to seeing how that all plays out. Thanks for sharing your work!

nice story :) it's getting more and more dangerous. it's not so simple in the pokemon world with team rocket and giant pokemon.
Did he forget about his egg? poor little egg on the bottom of the sea.

Got to the egg part and stopped.
There is no world in which people in modern Kanto, least of which Oak, don't know pokemon come from eggs.