more perhaps have him catch a pokemon baby alone ?

Quiet a good story line but Mason is better of travelling alone. Moreover you have to do better if you want to continue thus as this have many grammatical mistakes and some names of pokemon have wrong spelling.
Anyways good try Kudos.

Really interesting, I’m looking forward to seeing which Pokémon he’s going to catch. I also love that he started with a Dratini, I’m kind of hoping he gets a Charmander just to have something a Dratini can really train with when it becomes a Dragonite. Still I’m pretty excited to see where this goes, so please update this again soon. Oh, I almost forgot are you only going to have him catch Pokémon from Kanto and maybe Johto while he’s in Kanto?

An interesting start I wonder how you will be different? Hope he trains alongside his pokemon.

Interesting so far keep it up. What’s the hold limit for Pokémon in your story and will he try to catch legendaries

So, is he going to introduce those lost souls of the Kanto region to Slayer? Maybe the DOOM 2016 OST?
Just imagine Jesse and James' faces a when, in the middle of their first introduction, they hear either "Raining Blood" or the first track of the DOOM soundtrack (the one that introduces the Doom Slayer.)

"...Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light! Surrender now, or pre-"
[Deep demonic voice] *...He chose the path of perpetual torment
In his ravenous hatred he found no peace
And with boiling blood he scoured the umbral plains
Seeking vengeance against the dark lords who had wronged him
And those that tasted the bite of his sword named him...
The Doom Slayer*

Tis story made me feel very very pitiful got two jobs but can't afford to buy a iPad the iPod those hard drives and one MacBook Pro...cant belive that got jealous of a oc from a pokemon fanfiction...
Give this rich but orphan Mason a aerodactyl or shiny magikarp

more ! more ! more ! perhaps have him catch a pichu baby alone in the forest ? perhaps have him catch a shiny magikarp , have him take one of the carapuce if you make him travel with ash ?

Interesting. Let's see how this goes. Good luck!

Yes! We want more of this story. Great start!

awesome :)

It is a great beginin. I LOVE the way you write.
Could I recomend Storm having an Alolan Vulpix?
It has a traer movepoll and could be an ideal anti-tank.
Have a good day

good shit

I really like this story it's quite interesting

Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, AshxSelene Writer, and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.

They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.

They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.

They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want, fyi Pokemon names are not species names and that's been officially recongized in modern English. So yes it's correct to capitalize Pikachu for instance. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting (It's "Hello," She said dialogue is a seperate sentence). Spend time putting out a text block of non issues that are not going to help you. Don't get me started on Arceus.

What's worse is they all try to pass it off as them being critics in their reviews. Any review with it in the begining should be ignored if you get it.

Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.

If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Handle Criticism Maturely the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.

Best to remove it.

Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.

If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense land they been told by the admins to take it down.

As for the users you need to block and how, you block by heading to heading too the toolbar were you posted a story. Click on account and you should see the option to block users. The add their id numbers.

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