Reviews for One Piece: Lightning Dragon
Gigame chapter 25 . 10/15/2023
deleting and re downloading the story ain't working either
Gigame chapter 25 . 10/15/2023
weird, it's says that the newest chapter updated to 26, and the comments are commenting about chapter 26, the story also shows 26 chapters, and yet all I can read are 1-25 chapters. where are thou 26th chapters
huuduy.nguyen1234567890 chapter 26 . 10/13/2023
Thx for the chapter
merendinoemiliano chapter 26 . 10/13/2023
Simple but well described chapter, best of luck with nexts
Uvuvwevwevwe Onyetenyevwe Ugwe chapter 1 . 10/5/2023
What do you mean where D on top the marine? Arent Garp are D? Monkey D Garp? Really mate. Arent sengoku best friend of Garp and he knows how sengoku works. Better be revolutionaries. They are kind of rare in fanfics.
Blue-Happens chapter 5 . 10/1/2023
lightning rasengan come on Chidori was right there! I know it's not as well known of a reference, but it is literally that.

not really important I guess, its just peeving me out
Blue-Happens chapter 3 . 10/1/2023
you got some basic grammar mistakes, missing words, wrong but similar words in context. the simple things that a squiggly red line in a word doc won't pick up on.

doing a read through in a slightly different font or something would be very beneficial to you! or a beta reader but I've never had the pleasure of using one.

still a fun story tho! I've always wanted an actual good marine story! we'll see how he reacts to the horrid shiz in there, and how he (potentially) makes things better. good luck with whatever you're doing today
dan.lew.upg chapter 25 . 9/20/2023
cant wait for more
huuduy.nguyen1234567890 chapter 25 . 9/11/2023
Thx for the new chapter
DeadKing24712 chapter 16 . 9/8/2023
The technique you made up is probably possible for Garp considering the six marine powers has that wind blade kick. Im almost positive Oda will make use of a Garp creating wind fists with his punch.
merendinoemiliano chapter 25 . 9/7/2023
Very good action
ingramethan698 chapter 25 . 9/7/2023
Ben 10
zubzilla chapter 24 . 8/19/2023
Can you hurry up with the story, please
zubzilla chapter 6 . 8/19/2023
Cliche mc picking up a animal companion
2000str chapter 9 . 8/17/2023
ch9 is really disturbing garp would never ask his grandson "that"
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