Reviews for The arrival of Blaze
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 4 . 8/17/2003
Please continue. So how about a background chapter on Blaze? Just an Idea.
The Time Traveler chapter 4 . 7/21/2003
Excellent! Nice job! But, please, see if you can put Meta Knight in this story!
Pink Shimmer chapter 4 . 7/21/2003
Sorry, It wasn't letting me get into fanfic which was kind of strange. Anways, very good.

Only problems is that you don't put in periods where they need to be. Cap some of the beginning of the sentences too. But very good fic, keep it up. D
SP Action Extreme 2 Noid chapter 4 . 7/21/2003
Excellent DUDE, write more and check out more of my fanfics.
SP Action Extreme 2 Noid chapter 3 . 7/16/2003
This is becoming great stuff. By the way, you have more then 10 reviews now you evil story writer. So please write more.
SP Action Extreme 2 Noid chapter 2 . 7/15/2003
Now this is a good chapter. Very Good.
SP Action Extreme 2 Noid chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
O...K. Go start I guess.
Darkest Moon chapter 3 . 5/28/2003
cool story,i cant wait for the next chapter to come,plus i got my own character too her name is kini starod,oh before i stop writing i want to see the pic of blaze ,plz e-mail me the pic -
The Time Traveler chapter 3 . 5/28/2003
Very nice. I have one small request, Pleasse put Meta Knight into this fic. "See you in the future!"
Pink Shimmer chapter 2 . 5/9/2003
Well done! I think I could be hooked on this for some time now.

Write more please! _
The Time Traveler chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Very nice so far. Please write more as soon as you can! As Doc Brown says, "See you in the future!"
BabyCharmander chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Getting interesting... But can you please seperate it into paragraphs?
The Time Traveler chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
Very interesting! I await the next chapter.
BabyCharmander chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
WAY to short. And it should be "What happened?" not "What happened!" Anyway... Just try to write a longer chapter, proofread it, and it'll be a good fic! _
Pink Shimmer chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
Very good.

It's just very hard to understand when the sentence stops like this.

But I don't much care about the problem. The story sounds very intresting even if you did that.

Right the next chapter, please?