|Reviews for Edward Cullen President of the Dungeon&Dragons Society of Forks HS|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12
Really loved this !
Took me back to the huge crush I had on my own bespectacled DnD DM ! Lovely story, cute and fun - a real snapshot of high school nerdy love - Annie
| 91BlackMoon chapter 1 . 8/11
Very good story! Enjoyed it. Don’t even read that disgusting review that.. person.. placed. Looked up critics United, apparently that reviewer is just a pissed of ‘author’, using that word lightly, who is angry that he/she(?) got a bad review by CU because he was placing kiddie porn on the site. Ignore it, I reported it already, hope others will do so too!
| Super Shadow 2018 chapter 1 . 8/10
Great story,dude. Ignore Critics United and continue writing what you like too. Or better yet report them for abuse. As for Hentai Kamen Fenikkusumaru, just block and report this miserable troll.
| Defenders united chapter 1 . 7/27
To the heinous bitch who wrote such hate aka Critics United and some other anime bullshit name:
Your ass hasn’t received more than 15 reviews on any project and yet you want to TRY to bring down someone else?
You probably live in a strangers basement cause your own mama don’t want you.
Fuck off with that bullshit.
| Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 7/28
Thanks for sharing this with us.
| orchidluv chapter 1 . 7/27
There's .this yumminess? I'm definitely checking it out!
| Hentai Kamen Fenikkusumaru chapter 1 . 7/25
Calling that mass of revolting sludge of yours a story is like calling a bucket of putrid, stinking, maggot-infested garbage a steak dinner. Like rotting garbage, there’s occasionally some recognizable trace of what it was supposed to be, which only makes the rest of that disgusting sack of offal posing as fanfic just so much worse. Then you have the utter gall to beg people to praise your efforts, as though you actually made some effort instead of just scribbling down your brain drool and contaminating the Net with it. Nobody with the intelligence of a body louse would pretend that was a story. In fact, I owe your lice an apology for saying that. I’ve had toenail fungus that was smarter than you. I’ve read better stories in random combinations of words made from old bills that have gone through the paper shredder. You would have to get smarter to become a drooling idiot. Whoever deluded you into believing you could write ought to be flogged. Not only do you expose unsuspecting readers to the foul mess of slaughterhouse waste you call a story, but you cry like the whiny little baby you are when people don’t tell you it’s the best story ever. I bet you’re crying right now. You’re an infected boil on the buttocks of fandom. Your momma curses herself daily for ever letting a stupid brat like you be born. I hope you someday have the decency to blow your own head off and put yourself out of our misery.
Hentai Kamen Fenikkusumaru
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 1 . 7/15
I found this story and love it! Please consider expanding it.
| ZadArchie chapter 1 . 7/13
Just so you are aware, this story contains sexually explicit content, meaning it really should be rated MA. MA-rated content has not been allowed on this site since 2002, meaning it violates the Rules & Guidelines we all agreed to when we signed up for accounts. Not saying you can't write it, but saying this just isn't the place for it. There are plenty of other sites that would gladly take it, including, but not limited to, AO3 and AdultFanfiction. You could also write a watered-down version to stay kosher with site rules and post an unabridged version on another site. Take these suggestions into consideration, as they will help you avoid issues with the rules in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant.
| JuleKiwi chapter 1 . 7/13
| Bedward2922 chapter 1 . 7/9
Best story ever
| traceybuie chapter 1 . 7/4
That was such a sweet sexy story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
| LaPumuckl chapter 1 . 7/4
I loved this one in the contest and still do so!
| brebre99 chapter 1 . 7/3
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/2
This was absolutely fantastic! I did not read that contest. I love your entry. So fun to read. I really loved their personal game with the die and the sexual shenanigans that went with it. Loved learning that she had been crushing on him for just as long as he had for her. Loved that she whacked Mike upside the head to get him off Edward. And, Edward had the courage to follow her to her house to give her book back to her. Very, very good one shot. Thank you for it.