Ash con aura dark debe ser muy aterrador incluso para hacer llorar a alguien tan implacable como hunter j como dijo Scott en un capítulo de Pokémon, y justo cuando había visto todo

Interesting concept. I do wonder how much of his original journey you are going to go through again.

lmfao, it doesnt need to be said that a left-aligned text is way easier to read than a centralized

Can you please take it off the center format and fix it to left paragraph format. It looks like shit and is hard to read

:)

This is great can you have ash meet victor when victors the champion for a sivally vs sivally fight

Sorta wish instead of holding Ashs hat.. Cynthia actually put it on and wore it haha

Well.. l mean. Of course Ash would do a lot better; He is a Champion. Surprised he didn't offer to call contacts either.
Been so long since last updated I had to reread the story... hope you don't take so long next time (IF life doesn't get in the way...or video games haha).
Why do the good stories have to take so long to see fruition! Ugh

Please ignore the guests review. He does not deserve happiness. Please continue, although I do recommend putting the text aligned left

Good thing he hasn't mentioned to anyone he beat Cynthia because everyone would be gunning for him lol.

hello i like this story when will update come? :)

Yes! An update! I will have to admit I forgot about this. Please come back soon and not so long!

Please update

Please update quickly.