Reviews for Saotome Naruto
TimberlineWolf chapter 10 . 7/10/2014
hey, not sure if you're still around at all, but...
Are you planning to continue this?
cause this is some Grade A material you have

as a side note, i love the incorporation of Rumiko's other Nerimites XD
Sakura Lisel chapter 9 . 9/10/2013
Genma and Nodoka had to be kidding. Even if Ranma HADN'T visited Akane first before he came to see them, and hadn't already offered to Akane and the twins with him back to the Naruto world, what did his parents expect exactly? *lol* seeing how old the twins are, and how long Ranma has been gone since ANYONE has seen or heard from him in that long, Genma and Nodoka really thought Ranma would still be SINGLE and AVAILABLE to take up with Akane and marry her and be a dad to HER kids after being away for sixteen years? The way Genma was doing the 'the schools are going to be joined' dance, you'd think the old panda has been thinking his only sons been living a celibate and sex free life with no wife or OTHER kids all these years, if he and Nodoka really thought Ranma was back to finally marry Akane, or that he even WANTED to marry her after all these years of being away or that he might have started another family, with a wife who might not want to share HER man with his ex-girlfriend. Even if the NWC gang didn't know WHY Ranma was gone all this time, the fact that he WAS gone, with no contact with ANYONE even the woman he unknowingly left behind pregnant, should have been a clue to something as the years went by with no word. In their insane minds, it could have meant either he cut off all ties to his past, or he might be dead as the reason why nobody's seen or heard from him in all this time. *lol*
iwish328 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
the first naruto crossover
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Piss off and die you Canon and Sakura loving dipshit.
Reishin Amara chapter 10 . 12/11/2012
u should sneak happosai in like u snuck sasuke nations are just like the time period he power meanw status.
DAngelHime chapter 10 . 9/12/2012
oh my..i so love your story and plot..i so really love it that i am disappointed that you have stopped updating 7 years ago..hopefully you really haven't given up on this wonderful story of yours..I WILL BE WAITING! 8D
Ranmaleopard chapter 10 . 2/12/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Ranmaleopard chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
dark wolf of death chapter 10 . 9/14/2011
well not 6 weeks or months just years 2 update XD i hope u r still writing this because i am SO in2 it now
Hanzo of the Salamander 2.0 chapter 10 . 9/7/2011
I look forward to reading what happens next in your story

Rune Tobor chapter 10 . 2/23/2011
This is good.


This is very good.



Now please update.
andysanime chapter 10 . 11/30/2010
Good job on this story.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
I take back my earlier statment. Like to many authors before you i feel like removeing your femur and beating you senceless with it while drugging you to stay awake as long as possible.

When you change a variable in a story you change the entire timeline. The degree to which this change is evident is meant to be depentant on the magnitude of the change. You changed the entire beginning of naruto's life to a degree that makes this entire chapter completely impossible under logical flow and quite literaly destroys all but the most basic parts of each cannon plot line. specifically the parts controlled by outside influances like the akatsuki and orochimaru.

I can vaguely understand letting the battle with mizuki taking place since with no clear patsy he'd have likely changed his timetable to steal the scroll either earlier or later and it's possible he could have run across naruto on his way out and let his hate make him do somthing stupid. Thing is you left out the rest of set up for that situation. No body noticed the scroll missing the first time except for sarutobi and he tried to keep the whole thing quiet. Iruka and the rest of the ninja after naruto learned of the theft because Mizuki told them in order to set up naruto to take the fall. The time he used to do this gave naruto the time he needed to learn the bare minimum to perform a jounin ranked technique that had been banned because it was dangerous for masters to use and then only just barely after nearly six hours of incredably determined work. While him learning the technique signifigantly faster in this timeline is probable due to his new upbringing simply reading a scroll once is not going to do it. even for masters it takes practice and time to learn somthing new if you don't have a sharingan eye and someone to demonstrate. As was in the story Mizuki was a low to mid level chunin with a specialization in instructing and was defeated by a loser accademy student who's only skill was tactics and high chakra levels, your naruto is completely different in education, skill, confidence and isn't burdened down by the sudden revelation of his prisoner in a bad light like he was in the manga. He had a father figure explain the situation forgive him for it explain that it wasn't a bad thing or his fault and that he wasn't what people abused him for and your writing indicated that he had time to think about it before the attack.

Then come the team assignments. Teams are devided first on specific skills, Team 8 was made for tracking, team 10 capture and interrogation team gai for heavy combat so on and so fourth. Next they're devided by politics. Ino-Shika-cho is an old alliancee between the three clans and when they have three in a class they're grouped together, Team konohamaru has the grandchildren of thesarutobi's old team. so on and so fourth. Finally the left overs are split up to even out the teams spowe, best shinobi best kunoichi worst of either side. That was the point of Team 7 sarutobi's students (the sanin) and Minaito's own students. You left the team without an explanation beyond well hey this isn't really what we were supposed to have done. If anything naruto performance in the exam and battle ranma used as a lesson should have made him either top shinobi teaming him with sakura and an OC or second teaming him with two OC's. If you read the data books and interviews you'll know that Kakashi's ultimatum in the manga was a way to add pressure rather than the generally accepted idea that the rookie nine were the only teams from naruto's class. The only teams to go into the exam as rookies perhaps but the only one no.

With just the little that i've read thus far i can only wonder the number of headaches this story will cause me if i continue reading past ch3. Are you worth it? Is this just startup problems, or somthing more serious? Please, do reply, I look forward to the argument.
Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
good charactorization of ranma, not bad for naruto taking into account his new and different life but the end of your chapter was straight crap and felt rushed as if you forced the words out because you wanted somthing and didn't know how to write it. good story otherwise.
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