Reviews for Mario and Bowser: Frenemies Forever (Redux)
StarlitDuck chapter 2 . 5/1/2020
This is interesting, especially when it comes to the interactions between Mario and Bowser. They don't seem like arch enemies so much as siblings in the middle of a rivalry.

There is one thing I would fix about this chapter, and that is to add a line or a "..." when you change scenes. Otherwise, it is a little confusing, especially with how you seem to shift pretty frequently. Other that, you seem to be doing just fine.
StarlitDuck chapter 1 . 5/1/2020
This is a really good opening. I can tell you from experience that Mario Kart scenes are hard to write, so the fact that you managed to pull one off AND make it exciting at the same time is very impressive. I am also interested to see how Bowser and Mario's rivalry builds up over the course of the plot.
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 12/12/2019
Good story obviously