Reviews for Betrayal Inevitable
momalu chapter 20 . 9/5/2020
It was a good story and it deserved a better ending. Too bad you lost your mojo.
machetemom chapter 8 . 6/25/2020
Twinder chapter 20 . 6/10/2020
A truly amazing story! I wish you would a sequel! I don't feel this story is complete!

Please consider a sequel!
Thank You
Munkeyfump20 chapter 20 . 5/30/2020
Wow thanks for the very good read as always. Sorry that this is the end as it has still got a lot of potential for more but its your story so I will wait and see when you have finished it.
Linda Dockery chapter 20 . 5/25/2020
Wow I really loved this story mercy what I hate that Christian broke it off with Ana but I don't think he slept with her just to get his rocks off with her again before he said adios and leaving her
Yeah I know I'm writing from a few chapters back I tend to do that every now and then
I kinda understand why Christian felt like he had to break up with her to keep his family safe but I wish he hadn't of slept her thata empty empty her the empty and her slept him over and over if he was sure he wanted to be with her, I think they both were conflicted but Christian more so
Damn Jackie Boy is one crazy mf Lordy mercy how can one person be so demented to kill innocent women like that glad they got to her with the help from Christian's guys and Ana's friends

Oh lord have mercy my Jesus how could Mia and Stephen get married like that ? How could they say even think that way after Carrick and Grace gave Jacob a chance. Mia and Stephen felt betrayed really

Yes I'm sure it's going to take some time for Ana to trust Christian again but I hope they can work their problems and feelings out

Oh no I need more it can't end like that but understand it's your story so maybe one we will get to read your other ideas on this story
Thank you as always for sharing your thoughts and imagination with us
Hope this finds you and your loved ones safe and healthy during this Covid 19
Until next time
dorisalynne2003 chapter 20 . 5/24/2020
I love the story but as you stayed the ending was a little lacking. As you said maybe you will come back and fix it some day.
tullochsophia chapter 20 . 5/24/2020
Great chapter, thank you.
Hstevens chapter 20 . 5/24/2020
Thanks for wrapping it up...sadly life doesn’t always have happy endings right off the bat ...can’t wait for more of ur stuff ;)
Guest chapter 20 . 5/24/2020
Don’t bother writing your other stories because ending a story that had a big following like this one is a slap on the face to the people who supported you. If you write another story we know in advance that you will leave it weeks and weeks between updates and then end it like this one.
CTHEWOODS chapter 20 . 5/24/2020
I'm really sad the way this story ended. It had really great possibilities. I'm always team Christian and I really didn't like the way he looked weak and like a jerk. I loved the way you brought in the other character's names from your other story and loved your other story but this one left me put off. Sorry. I'm mean hell, Christian was just worried about her safety concerning her serial killer "uncle." And Ana did lie about it also. No need to make him out to be the asshole of the story.
smillss chapter 20 . 5/23/2020
Good story
dazzleglo chapter 20 . 5/23/2020
Loved this story, it was excellent.
vamomoftwins chapter 20 . 5/23/2020
Not happy with this chapter but loved the story as a whole
velosews chapter 20 . 5/23/2020
Thanks for leaving this kinda unfinished for now. A sequel would be great when you get your mojo back for this story.
debslmac chapter 20 . 5/23/2020
:) loved this story. I hope there will be a futuretake sometime
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